Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Instead of repeating 'I don't enjoy chatting,' express your feelings clearly and avoid confusing terms like 'face tattoo.' Keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: I don't enjoy chatting much because I'm an introvert. I prefer brief conversations rather than long talks.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and hesitations. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I usually chat about my personal life, such as my weekend plans and the shows I plan to watch on Netflix. These topics are casual and light-hearted.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with close friends rather than groups or strangers because I am shy and feel more comfortable with people I know well.

Sugestão: Good answer but avoid starting with 'But.' Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar for smoother flow.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face conversations because they are more comfortable and meaningful. Moreover, they help build deeper bonds and allow better understanding of the person.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitations and fragmented sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and maintain fluency.

Exemplo: No, I rarely argue with my friends because I am a shy and calm person who prefers to avoid conflicts.

× Well, I don't enjoy chatting quite much as I'm an introvert and I like to talk on face tattoo for a brief period of time.

✓ Well, I don't enjoy chatting very much as I'm an introvert and I like to talk face to face for a brief period of time.

The phrase 'quite much' is incorrect; 'very much' is the correct adverbial phrase to express degree. Also, 'talk on face tattoo' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'talk face to face'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But I usually talk about my personal life like what my what are my plans on weekend and what am I going to watch on Netflix?

✓ But I usually talk about my personal life, like what my plans are for the weekend and what I am going to watch on Netflix.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced question forms within a statement, causing confusion. The corrected sentence restructures the clauses into proper statements with correct word order, improving clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I usually don't talk to strangers.

✓ I usually don't talk to strangers.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I prefer talking to my friends whom I know and I share a close bond as I'm shy and I have that hesitation to approach strangers.

✓ I prefer talking to my friends whom I know and with whom I share a close bond, as I'm shy and have hesitation in approaching strangers.

Added 'with whom' to correctly link the relative clause and changed 'that hesitation to approach' to 'hesitation in approaching' for proper prepositional use and smoother flow.

× I think face to face conversations forms are deeper bonding and it helps to understand the person more clearly.

✓ I think face-to-face conversations form a deeper bond and help to understand the person more clearly.

The subject 'conversations' is plural, so the verb should be 'form' (not 'forms'). Also, 'deeper bonding' is corrected to 'a deeper bond' for proper noun usage. 'Helps' is changed to 'help' to agree with the plural subject.

× No, I hardly argue with my friends. Normally. I'm a shy person and I am calm and quiet and I don't indulge in, uh, argue.

✓ No, I hardly argue with my friends. Normally, I'm a shy person and I am calm and quiet, and I don't indulge in arguing.

The phrase 'indulge in, uh, argue' is incorrect; 'indulge in arguing' is the correct gerund form after 'indulge in'. Also, punctuation is adjusted for better flow.