Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. Usually, we meet on weekends to share stories and learn new things from each other.

Sugestão: Focus on using correct verb tenses and plural forms. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to give specific details. Also, try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily routines and personal lives. For example, we share stories about our weekends and discuss plans for upcoming events, which helps us stay connected and updated.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar by using complete sentences and correct articles. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas clearly. Avoid repeating similar phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because group discussions offer many different perspectives. Also, I can learn new things and expand my social circle by meeting new people.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and articles. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Try to be more specific about why face-to-face communication is better.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to understand body language and facial expressions better. This helps me stay connected with my friends and quickly resolve any misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'although' and 'but' to show contrast. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about personal matters or other topics. Although misunderstandings happen, I resolve them quickly because I have a strong connection with my friends and understand them well.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, it is a wonderful way to catch up and share different stories and it's helps to relax and unwind for busy day.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. It is a wonderful way to catch up and share different stories, and it helps to relax and unwind after a busy day.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with comma splices. It should be divided into separate sentences or connected properly with conjunctions. Also, 'it's helps' is incorrect; 'it helps' is correct. 'For busy day' should be 'after a busy day' to express the intended meaning.

× And usually I meet with my friends on weekends and we share a different things and I learn a new things.

✓ And usually I meet with my friends on weekends, and we share different things and I learn new things.

The phrase 'a different things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Similarly, 'a new things' is incorrect for the same reason. The article 'a' is used with singular nouns only.

× I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine and personal lives. We share a different stories for our weekend and I share a plan for next weekend and upcoming events.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine and personal lives. We share different stories about our weekend, and I share a plan for next weekend and upcoming events.

The phrase 'a different stories' is incorrect because 'stories' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'for our weekend' is better expressed as 'about our weekend' to indicate the topic of sharing.

× In this way, I easily connected with my friends and updated for each other.

✓ In this way, I easily connect with my friends and stay updated about each other.

The verbs 'connected' and 'updated' are in the past tense, but the context requires present tense to indicate habitual action. Also, 'updated for each other' is incorrect; 'stay updated about each other' is the correct expression.

× I always prefer to group of people because in Group discussions many different perspectives and I learn new things and I also meet a new people and expand my social circle and I always like to different opinions.

✓ I always prefer to chat with a group of people because group discussions offer many different perspectives. I learn new things, meet new people, expand my social circle, and enjoy hearing different opinions.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper conjunctions and prepositions. 'Prefer to group of people' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to chat with a group of people'. 'A new people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and should not have 'a'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always prefer to communicate face to face because this way I always understand body language and facial experience and I always connected with my friends and any misunderstanding I solve quickly.

✓ I always prefer to communicate face to face because this way I can understand body language and facial expressions, and I am always connected with my friends. Any misunderstanding I solve quickly.

'Facial experience' is incorrect; the correct term is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'I always connected' should be 'I am always connected' to maintain present tense and correct verb form. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I always prefer to communicate face to face because this way I always understand body language and facial experience and I always connected with my friends and any misunderstanding I solve quickly.

✓ I always prefer to communicate face to face because this way I can understand body language and facial expressions, and I am always connected with my friends. I can solve any misunderstanding quickly.

The modal verb 'can' is needed to express ability in 'I can understand' and 'I can solve'. The original sentence lacks these modals, making it grammatically incomplete.

× Yes, I argue with my friends for things like personal, even any topic.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends about things like personal matters or any topic.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'argue about' is the correct collocation. Also, 'things like personal' is incomplete; it should be 'personal matters' or 'personal topics'.

× I understand misunderstandings. But I resolve this quickly because I'm very connected with my friends and I understand them.

✓ I understand misunderstandings, but I resolve them quickly because I'm very connected with my friends and understand them well.

The sentence 'I understand misunderstandings' is vague; it is better to say 'I understand misunderstandings occur'. Also, 'this' should be 'them' to refer to 'misunderstandings' (plural). The sentence is combined for better flow.