Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'As I do chatting' and use more natural phrases such as 'I enjoy chatting'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me relieve stress. I feel comfortable sharing my thoughts with them, which makes our conversations very relaxing and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and correct grammar such as 'things that happen' instead of 'things happen'. Also, try to be more specific about the cases you discuss.

Exemplo: I usually chat about my day and the cases I handle as a veterinarian. For example, I discuss difficult cases with my friends to get their different perspectives, which helps me find better solutions.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding a clear topic sentence and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid informal expressions like 'Yeah' in formal speaking. Try to explain how group chats improve your work specifically.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share diverse ideas and approaches. This collaboration often helps me improve my work by learning from others' experiences.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use clearer sentences and avoid repeating phrases like 'face to face'. Also, explain why face-to-face communication is better with specific reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and genuine. Unlike social media, it allows us to read body language and build stronger connections.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'A1 conclusion' and complete your sentences properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when our ideas differ. However, these discussions help us understand each other better and learn new things.

× As I do chatting with my friends who are close to me and I can really say that it will relieve my stress and I'm very talkative to them.

✓ As I chat with my friends who are close to me, I can really say that it relieves my stress and I'm very talkative with them.

The phrase 'do chatting' is incorrect; the verb 'chat' should be used in its base form without 'do' when expressing habitual actions. Also, 'will relieve' is changed to 'relieves' to match the present tense context. 'Talkative to' should be 'talkative with' to use the correct preposition.

× I'm very talkative to them.

✓ I'm very talkative with them.

The correct preposition to use with 'talkative' is 'with' not 'to'. 'Talkative with' indicates the person you are comfortable speaking with.

× Even though I'm not that much talkative to others but with them I really feel at ease and I can speak whatever I want.

✓ Even though I'm not that talkative with others, with them I really feel at ease and I can speak whatever I want.

The phrase 'that much talkative' is incorrect; 'that talkative' is the correct form. Also, 'talkative to' should be 'talkative with' as explained earlier.

× I usually talk about my day and the things happen on the day because as I'm a veterinarian, really I have to discuss a few cases with my friends so that I could get a different idea from their perspective views.

✓ I usually talk about my day and the things that happen during the day because, as I'm a veterinarian, I really have to discuss a few cases with my friends so that I can get different ideas from their perspectives.

The phrase 'the things happen on the day' is missing 'that' to connect the clause. 'Could' is changed to 'can' to express present ability. 'Perspective views' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'perspectives'. Also, 'a different idea' is changed to 'different ideas' to match plural 'perspectives'.

× So whenever we have a time and we mostly talk about these cases.

✓ So whenever we have time, we mostly talk about these cases.

The phrase 'a time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here and should be used without 'a'. Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with group of people because it can enhance our communication with each other and we can share different types of ideas and approaches to our work.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because it can enhance our communication with each other and we can share different types of ideas and approaches to our work.

The phrase 'with group of people' is missing the article 'a' before 'group'.

× In my point of view, it's better to communicate face to face rather than in social media because it's a virtual, it looks like a virtual meeting, not the real.

✓ In my point of view, it's better to communicate face to face rather than on social media because it's virtual; it looks like a virtual meeting, not the real thing.

The correct preposition with 'social media' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'a virtual' is incomplete; 'virtual' is an adjective and needs a noun or should be used as 'it's virtual'. Added 'thing' after 'real' for clarity.

× Even though we can FaceTime to time, but it's it's not the real thing that we can approach our friends, but communication with face to face.

✓ Even though we can FaceTime from time to time, it's not the real thing where we can approach our friends; face-to-face communication is better.

The phrase 'FaceTime to time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'FaceTime from time to time'. The sentence had redundant conjunctions 'Even though' and 'but' together; one should be removed. Also, 'communication with face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face communication'.

× As I often argue with my friends because our ideas doesn't match with each other, but somehow we'll come to A1 conclusion that will follow each other and it's really a good thing first to discuss so that we could gain more knowledge related to our.

✓ I often argue with my friends because our ideas don't match with each other, but somehow we come to a conclusion that we all follow, and it's really a good thing to discuss first so that we can gain more knowledge related to our work.

The verb 'doesn't' is incorrect with plural subject 'ideas'; it should be 'don't'. 'We'll come to A1 conclusion' is unclear; corrected to 'we come to a conclusion'. 'That will follow each other' is unclear and corrected to 'that we all follow'. 'Could' is changed to 'can' to express present ability. Added 'work' at the end for clarity.