Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Well, definitely Charlie and friend is a thing I have to do every day, which cheer me up and also help me strengthen the relationship.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I think I often chat with my friend with some common topics such as umm, makeup tricks, well travel places. Those topic we are all umm fascinated about.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
Well, let me think of it. I believe I like I'm chatting to a single people because it's more easily to have a deep conversation that you can talk some of your personal problem to others and get the useful advice.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Tell definitely face to face. It's difficult to feel other person emotional feelings but face to face you can see what are they look like. It's really important to recognize others emotion.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Now I hate any kind of conflicts because it can not only make me feel blued but also it might damage our relationship.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的观点,但语言不够自然,存在语法错误和用词不当,如“Charlie and friend”应为“chatting with friends”,“cheer me up”应为“cheers me up”。建议多练习正确的句子结构和词汇搭配,使表达更流畅自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends every day because it cheers me up and helps strengthen our relationships.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“with my friend with some common topics”应简化为“with my friends about common topics”,且“umm”频繁使用影响流畅度。建议减少口头语,使用更准确的表达,并提供更具体的细节。
Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about common topics like makeup tips and travel destinations that we all find fascinating.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,如“I'm chatting to a single people”应为“chatting with a single person”,“more easily”应为“easier”。建议加强语法练习,简化句子结构,同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to have deep conversations and share personal problems to get useful advice.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“Tell definitely”应为“Definitely”,“what are they look like”应为“what they look like”。建议注意句子结构,使用正确的时态和词序,并丰富细节。
Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand others' emotions by seeing their facial expressions.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中“blued”用词错误,应为“blue”或“sad”。句子结构不够清晰,建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达情感和原因。
Exemplo: I dislike conflicts because they make me feel sad and can damage our relationships.
× Well, definitely Charlie and friend is a thing I have to do every day, which cheer me up and also help me strengthen the relationship.
✓ Well, definitely chatting with Charlie and friends is something I have to do every day, which cheers me up and also helps me strengthen the relationship.
这里“friend”应为复数形式“friends”,因为通常和多个朋友聊天;“thing”前应加“something”更合适;动词“cheer”和“help”应加-s,因为主语是单数“chatting”。
× I think I often chat with my friend with some common topics such as umm, makeup tricks, well travel places. Those topic we are all umm fascinated about.
✓ I think I often chat with my friends about some common topics such as umm, makeup tricks, and travel places. Those topics we are all umm fascinated about.
“friend”应为复数“friends”,因为谈论多个话题;“topic”应为复数“topics”;“with”应改为“about”表示谈论内容。
× Well, let me think of it. I believe I like I'm chatting to a single people because it's more easily to have a deep conversation that you can talk some of your personal problem to others and get the useful advice.
✓ Well, let me think about it. I believe I like chatting to a single person because it's easier to have a deep conversation where you can talk about some of your personal problems to others and get useful advice.
“people”是复数,前面用“a single”应改为单数“person”;“easily”应改为形容词“easier”;“problem”应为复数“problems”;“the useful advice”中“the”不必要,且“advice”不可数。
× Well, let me think of it. I believe I like I'm chatting to a single people because it's more easily to have a deep conversation that you can talk some of your personal problem to others and get the useful advice.
✓ Well, let me think about it. I believe I like chatting to a single person because it's easier to have a deep conversation where you can talk about some of your personal problems to others and get useful advice.
“think of”应改为“think about”更自然;“talk some of your personal problem to others”中“talk”后应加介词“about”。
× I think I often chat with my friend with some common topics such as umm, makeup tricks, well travel places. Those topic we are all umm fascinated about.
✓ I think I often chat with my friends about some common topics such as umm, makeup tricks, and travel places. Those topics we are all umm fascinated about.
“chat with my friend with some common topics”中第二个“with”应改为“about”,表示谈论内容。
× Well, definitely Charlie and friend is a thing I have to do every day, which cheer me up and also help me strengthen the relationship.
✓ Well, definitely chatting with Charlie and friends is something I have to do every day, which cheers me up and also helps me strengthen the relationship.
主语是单数“chatting”,动词“cheer”和“help”应加-s,变为“cheers”和“helps”。
× Tell definitely face to face. It's difficult to feel other person emotional feelings but face to face you can see what are they look like. It's really important to recognize others emotion.
✓ Tell you definitely face to face. It's difficult to feel other person's emotional feelings but face to face you can see what they look like. It's really important to recognize others' emotions.
“Tell definitely”应为“Tell you definitely”;“other person emotional feelings”应加所有格“other person's”;“what are they look like”语序错误,应为“what they look like”;“others emotion”应为复数所有格“others' emotions”。
× Well, let me think of it. I believe I like I'm chatting to a single people because it's more easily to have a deep conversation that you can talk some of your personal problem to others and get the useful advice.
✓ Well, let me think about it. I believe I like chatting to a single person because it's easier to have a deep conversation where you can talk about some of your personal problems to others and get useful advice.
“more easily”应改为形容词“easier”,因为这里需要形容词修饰“to have a deep conversation”。
× Now I hate any kind of conflicts because it can not only make me feel blued but also it might damage our relationship.
✓ Now I hate any kind of conflicts because it can not only make me feel blue but also might damage our relationship.
“blued”是错误的过去分词,应为形容词“blue”;“it might damage”中“it”可省略,保持句子简洁。