Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Попробуйте использовать более правильную грамматику и избегать повторов, чтобы ответ звучал естественнее и более связно. Также старайтесь формулировать предложения короче и яснее.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends through messaging apps because almost every teenager has a smartphone nowadays, so it's a common way to stay connected.

Sugestão: Старайтесь использовать более точные выражения и избегать неясных фраз, таких как "something that we can talk about loudly". Добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about our homework and future plans. Additionally, we sometimes share secrets that we can openly discuss.

Sugestão: Используйте правильные выражения и грамматику, например, "I prefer chatting face-to-face with one person." Также добавьте связующие слова для плавности речи.

Exemplo: Personally, I prefer chatting face-to-face with one friend because it feels more comfortable and personal.

Sugestão: Избегайте повторов и исправляйте ошибки в речи. Формулируйте предложения более чётко и логично, используя связующие слова.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication. For example, I often go for walks with my best friend because we always have interesting topics to discuss.

Sugestão: Старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, избегая путаницы. Используйте правильную грамматику и более точные слова, чтобы выразить свои мысли ясно.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions on various topics, but it's normal in friendships.

× Uh, yes, of course I often chatting with my friends in some messengers.

✓ Uh, yes, of course I often chat with my friends on some messengers.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'I often'. The correct form is the base verb 'chat' because 'often' is an adverb modifying the verb in simple present tense. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using messengers or platforms.

× I often chatting with my friends in some messengers.

✓ I often chat with my friends on some messengers.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to communication platforms; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× because everybody has a smartphone, mobile phone.

✓ because everybody has a smartphone or a mobile phone.

The phrase 'smartphone, mobile phone' is unclear and should be connected properly. Using 'or' clarifies that it can be either a smartphone or a mobile phone, both singular.

× Usually I chat with my friends about our home task or our plans.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about our homework or our plans.

The phrase 'home task' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'homework' which is uncountable or 'home tasks' if plural countable. 'Homework' is more natural here.

× Also, we chat about something that we can talk about loudly.

✓ Also, we chat about things that we can talk about openly.

The phrase 'talk about loudly' is unnatural. The correct expression is 'talk about openly' or 'talk about freely'.

× some secrets for example.

✓ some secrets, for example.

A comma is needed before 'for example' to separate the phrase properly.

× Personally, I face to face chat person so I have chats with only one person.

✓ Personally, I prefer face-to-face chatting, so I chat with only one person.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs. 'Face to face chat person' is not a correct phrase. It should be 'prefer face-to-face chatting' or 'prefer to chat face-to-face'. Also, 'have chats' is better as 'chat'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I'm fond of face to face meetings with my friends.

✓ I'm fond of face-to-face meetings with my friends.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective before a noun: 'face-to-face meetings'.

× I go for a walk with my best friends with with I'm sorry my mistake with my best friend almost every day because we always have something to discuss and use meetings for it.

✓ I go for a walk with my best friend almost every day because we always have something to discuss and use meetings for that.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect prepositions. 'With with' is a mistake. 'My best friends' should be singular 'my best friend' to match the rest of the sentence. 'Use meetings for it' is unclear; 'use meetings for that' is better.

× OK, question is quite unclear but I try to answer for it.

✓ OK, the question is quite unclear but I will try to answer it.

The sentence is missing the article 'the' before 'question'. Also, 'answer for it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'answer it'. The future tense 'will try' fits better here.

× Umm yes of course I agree with my friends because we are different peoples people and we have our own opinion, opinions for different topics.

✓ Umm yes, of course I agree with my friends because we are different people and we have our own opinions on different topics.

The word 'peoples people' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'people'. Also, 'opinion, opinions' should be plural 'opinions'. The preposition 'for' should be 'on' when referring to topics.