Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'relax' แทน 'relaxing' และ 'stories' แทน 'story' รวมถึงลดความซ้ำซ้อนในประโยคเพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Also, some of my friends have interesting stories, so I enjoy talking with them.

Sugestão: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น 'gossip' แทน 'gossips' และ 'politics' แทน 'political' รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

Exemplo: We usually chat about various topics, such as studies, sports, gossip, politics, or any issues that happen in our lives.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I feel it is easier' และใช้คำที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'person' แทน 'target' รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความชัดเจน

Exemplo: Personally, I enjoy chatting with only one close friend because I feel it is easier to focus on one person rather than many.

Sugestão: ควรแก้ไขคำศัพท์ที่ผิด เช่น 'chive' ควรเป็น 'shy' และ 'comfort zone' ควรเป็น 'a comfort zone' รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดแทรก เช่น 'uh' เพื่อความเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจน

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate via social media because I am introverted and feel shy when talking to people face to face. Therefore, chatting online is a comfort zone for me.

Sugestão: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'opinions are' และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'so' แทน 'to' ในประโยคสุดท้าย รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายและเหมาะสม

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because our opinions are not aligned. However, we try not to make it a big deal, so we resolve the issues as soon as possible to prevent future conflicts.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends, especially with my close friends because it helps me relaxing and release my stress.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends, especially with my close friends because it helps me relax and release my stress.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'relaxing' should be corrected to 'relax'.

× Moreover, some of my friends have some interesting story so I enjoy talking with them.

✓ Moreover, some of my friends have some interesting stories so I enjoy talking with them.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple interesting stories from friends.

× Literally anything, whether it be study, sport, gossips, political or any issues that happen in our life.

✓ Literally anything, whether it be study, sport, gossip, politics or any issues that happen in our life.

The words 'gossips' and 'political' are incorrectly used. 'Gossip' is uncountable and should not be pluralized, and 'political' is an adjective; the noun 'politics' should be used instead.

× Personally, I enjoy chatting with only one friend who is the closest to me because I feel it easier to focus on one target, not many.

✓ Personally, I enjoy chatting with only one friend who is the closest to me because I feel it is easier to focus on one target, not many.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'feel' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because I think I am introverted and I quite chive when talking to people face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I think I am introverted and I am quite shy when talking to people face to face.

The word 'chive' is incorrect; the correct word is 'shy'. Also, 'I am' is needed before 'quite shy' for correct sentence structure.

× So chatting via social media is uh, comfort zone to me.

✓ So chatting via social media is, uh, a comfort zone to me.

The phrase 'comfort zone' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because our opinion are not aligned with each other.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because our opinions are not aligned with each other.

The noun 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to agree with the plural subject 'our' and the plural verb 'are'.