Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Instead of repeating 'skills' twice, try to combine the ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, adding a linking phrase would improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I love chatting with friends because it helps me improve my communication and interpersonal skills, which are important in everyday life.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant content but is a bit repetitive and could be more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases like 'experience' twice. Also, try to be more specific about the emotions or advice you receive.

Exemplo: I usually chat about work with my friends; we share our experiences and feelings about different situations, which helps us learn from each other. For instance, my friends often give me advice on how to handle challenges at work.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide a specific example.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one trusted friend because building trust takes courage. For example, I usually talk to my best friend when I face challenges at work.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'see people's emotions' and 'see people's expression'.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe people's expressions and emotions directly, so I can tell if they are happy, disappointed, or upset.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, rephrase to avoid repeating 'argue' and 'suggestion' closely.

Exemplo: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I don't like conflicts; however, I do express my opinions clearly when sharing suggestions so they understand my point of view.

× I personally prefer to chat with only one people that who I actually trust because to trust a friend actually takes a huge umm courage to trust a friend.

✓ I personally prefer to chat with only one person who I actually trust because trusting a friend actually takes a huge umm courage.

The word 'people' is plural, but 'one' indicates singular, so 'people' should be corrected to 'person'. Also, 'that who' is incorrect; 'who' alone is sufficient. Additionally, the phrase 'to trust a friend actually takes a huge umm courage to trust a friend' is repetitive and awkward; it is better to say 'trusting a friend actually takes a huge umm courage'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And my friend can advise me what to do and what's not to do.

✓ And my friend can advise me on what to do and what not to do.

The phrase 'what's not to do' is incorrect; it should be 'what not to do'. Also, the verb 'advise' is typically followed by 'on' when referring to topics or actions. This correction improves the sentence's grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× I usually like to chat about work with friends and we tend to share our working experience to gain valuable experience from each other and to share our different emotions.

✓ I usually like to chat about work with friends, and we tend to share our work experiences to gain valuable insights from each other and to share our different emotions.

The phrase 'working experience' is better expressed as 'work experiences' to indicate plural experiences. Also, 'gain valuable experience from each other' is more naturally 'gain valuable insights from each other'. Adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence structure. These changes enhance clarity and correctness.

× I don't really argue with my friends because I actually don't like arguing with people, but when it comes to, umm, some suggestion, I'll tend to voice out my suggestions so that they can understand my ideas clearly.

✓ I don't really argue with my friends because I actually don't like arguing with people, but when it comes to, umm, some suggestions, I'll tend to voice my suggestions so that they can understand my ideas clearly.

The word 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' to match the context. Also, the phrase 'voice out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'voice' or 'voice out' is informal and less common. Using 'voice my suggestions' is more appropriate. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Umm, the moment when you are communicate with him or her, you get to know if he's happy or if he's disappointed or upset.

✓ Umm, the moment when you communicate with him or her, you get to know if he's happy or if he's disappointed or upset.

The phrase 'you are communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'you communicate'. The verb 'communicate' should be in the base form after 'when you'. This correction fixes the verb form to match the present tense usage.