Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, instead of repeating 'we have a fun,' you could say 'we enjoy chatting about various topics such as our daily routines and career goals.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us keep in touch. We often talk about our daily routines and career goals, which makes our conversations both enjoyable and meaningful.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words such as 'in addition' to connect ideas and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: As I mentioned earlier, we usually chat about our career goals and daily routines. In addition, we discuss events, festivals, and current trends, which keeps our conversations interesting.

Sugestão: Work on fluency by reducing hesitation and filler words. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences. Also, explain your preference with linking words like 'because' and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable and find it easier to express my feelings clearly in a one-on-one conversation.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and avoid filler words. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas. Also, correct verb tenses and make your answer more natural.

Exemplo: In my opinion, it depends on the situation. For serious discussions, I prefer face-to-face communication; however, for casual chats or when we're busy, I usually use social media.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences. Provide reasons and use linking words like 'because' to explain your answer.

Exemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends because we usually agree on most things. Therefore, we maintain a peaceful and friendly environment between us.

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends because in this way I usually keep in touch with my friends and we have a fun and we talk about a lot of things like our daily routines and our career goals and we have a fun with these things.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends because in this way I usually keep in touch with my friends and we have fun and we talk about a lot of things like our daily routines and our career goals and we have fun with these things.

The phrase 'have a fun' is incorrect because 'fun' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. The correct form is 'have fun'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× As I previously mentioned that we are usually a chat about, uh, the career goals, our daily routines and apart from this we also discuss, uh, something about the events, festivals and recurrent trends.

✓ As I previously mentioned, we usually chat about, uh, career goals, our daily routines and apart from this we also discuss, uh, events, festivals and recurrent trends.

The phrase 'we are usually a chat about' is incorrect. 'Chat' should be used as a verb here, so 'we usually chat about' is correct. Also, 'something about the events' is awkward; 'events' alone suffices. The article 'a' before 'chat' is incorrect because 'chat' is a verb here, not a noun.

× I would prefer to uh, chat with my only one friend because I'm not too much comfortable to talk with a group of people and I find it easy to talk with one person in because I find it convenient and easier uh, and I also uh, convey her my feelings in a comfortable way.

✓ I would prefer to, uh, chat with only one friend because I'm not very comfortable talking with a group of people and I find it easy to talk with one person because I find it convenient and easier, uh, and I also, uh, convey my feelings to her in a comfortable way.

The phrase 'my only one friend' is awkward; 'only one friend' is better. 'I'm not too much comfortable to talk' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I'm not very comfortable talking'. 'Convey her my feelings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'convey my feelings to her'. Also, 'talk with one person in' has an unnecessary 'in' which should be removed.

× According to my opinion, I think it's depend on the situation, if we had any uh, serious discussions, so I like to talk uh, face to face, but if we have uh, any casual chat or when we are busy, so at that time I prefer to chat via social media.

✓ In my opinion, I think it depends on the situation. If we have any, uh, serious discussions, I like to talk, uh, face to face, but if we have, uh, any casual chat or when we are busy, at that time I prefer to chat via social media.

'According to my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In my opinion'. 'It's depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends' because 'depend' needs third person singular agreement. Also, 'if we had' should be 'if we have' to maintain present tense consistency. The use of 'so' after conditional clauses is unnecessary and should be removed.

× No, I think there is no need to argue with my friend because almost we are agree on all the things, uh, so I think we don't have to argue or we just make peaceful environment, uh, between us, between us.

✓ No, I think there is no need to argue with my friends because we almost always agree on all things, uh, so I think we don't have to argue and we just create a peaceful environment, uh, between us.

'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. 'Almost we are agree' is incorrect; correct form is 'we almost always agree'. 'Make peaceful environment' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'create a peaceful environment'. Also, 'between us, between us' is repetitive and should be simplified.