Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and mostly effective, but you can improve by avoiding redundancy and making your sentences more concise. For example, instead of saying 'bring a sense of joy to me', you can say 'make me happy'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I love catching up with my friends. Usually, on weekends, we go to a cafe or have dinner at a restaurant where we share stories. This helps me unwind and makes me happy.

Sugestão: Your answer needs improvement in clarity and grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'discussing sat topic' and 'Some novels or games hit on win me'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the topics. Also, keep sentences concise and correct grammar errors.

Exemplo: It depends. On weekdays, we usually discuss upcoming or past lessons, which helps me broaden my knowledge. On weekends, we often play games together for fun.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to avoid repeating 'also' and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words like 'because' and 'which' to connect ideas clearly.

Exemplo: To be frank, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy listening to their diverse perspectives. This helps me relax and improves my social skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has some unclear phrases like 'choose the facts' and 'misunderstanding going on among acts'. Try to use clearer expressions and link your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a strengthen' should be 'strengthen'.

Exemplo: Frankly speaking, I prefer communicating face-to-face because it helps us clarify facts and avoid misunderstandings. Moreover, it strengthens our bond.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear words like 'kinder argue an ecopic'. Please use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, try to give a clear reason and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Of course, sometimes we argue about topics we are discussing. This helps us solve problems and broaden our knowledge.

× Mostly on weekends we go to a cafe or have a dinner at a restaurant.

✓ Mostly on weekends we go to a cafe or have dinner at a restaurant.

The word 'dinner' is an uncountable noun and does not require the article 'a'. Using 'a dinner' is incorrect. The correct form is 'have dinner'. This improves the naturalness and grammatical correctness of the sentence.

× We share our stories, which help me to unwind and also bring a sense of joy to me.

✓ We share our stories, which help me to unwind and also bring a sense of joy to me.

No correction needed here as the pronouns are used correctly.

× It actually depends, mostly on weekdays we talk about lessons ahead or a lesson we had before and I really love interacting with them and discussing sat topic with them because it's broaden my knowledge about the topic.

✓ It actually depends. Mostly on weekdays, we talk about lessons ahead or lessons we had before, and I really love interacting with them and discussing that topic with them because it broadens my knowledge about the topic.

The sentence had multiple issues: 'sat' should be 'that' (typo), 'it's broaden' should be 'it broadens' to agree with the subject, and missing commas for clarity. Also, 'a lesson we had before' should be plural 'lessons' to match 'lessons ahead'. Correct preposition use and verb agreement improve clarity and grammar.

× Some novels or games hit on win me.

✓ Some novels or games help me win.

The phrase 'hit on win me' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be that novels or games help the speaker win or succeed. The correction uses 'help me win' which is grammatically correct and clear.

× To be frank, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I love listening to their diverse perspective on a topic we will be discussing or we are discussing and also it helps me to relax and I find it enjoyable interacting with them.

✓ To be frank, I prefer chatting with a group of people because I love listening to their diverse perspectives on a topic we will be discussing or are discussing, and it also helps me to relax. I find it enjoyable interacting with them.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because it refers to multiple people's views. The sentence was long and needed commas and conjunctions for clarity. Also, 'and also' is redundant; 'and it also' is better. These changes improve grammar and readability.

× It also help me to socialize and also.

✓ It also helps me to socialize.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The phrase 'and also' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary, so it is removed for clarity.

× Frankly speaking, I prefer communicating face to face because usually when we meet we choose the facts.

✓ Frankly speaking, I prefer communicating face to face because usually when we meet we discuss the facts.

The phrase 'choose the facts' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'discuss the facts'. Using the correct verb improves the sentence's meaning and grammar.

× So it helps to solve any misunderstanding going on among acts and also a strengthen the bond between us.

✓ So it helps to solve any misunderstandings going on among us and also strengthens the bond between us.

'Acts' is incorrect here; it should be 'us' to refer to the people involved. 'A strengthen' is incorrect; it should be 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to match 'any'. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.

× Of course, sometimes we kinder argue an ecopic we are discussing which helps us to solve any problem or it broadens our knowledge on the subjects that we are learning or discussing.

✓ Of course, sometimes we kindly argue an topic we are discussing, which helps us to solve any problem or broadens our knowledge on the subjects that we are learning or discussing.

'Kinder' should be 'kindly' to correctly modify 'argue'. 'An ecopic' is a typo and should be 'a topic'. Also, 'it broadens' should be 'broadens' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. These corrections fix grammar and spelling errors.