Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "updates each other" should be "update each other" and avoid repeating "with my with our lives." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us update each other about our lives. For instance, we often share our challenges and plans, which strengthens our relationship.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "challenges face" should be "challenges they face," and "gave" should be "give." Also, avoid redundancy like "suggestions and advices."

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and feelings. For example, they often share the challenges they face with university assignments, and I listen carefully and try to give helpful advice.

Sugestão: Good answer but improve word choice and grammar. For example, "non verbal" should be "non-verbal," and "safety" should be "safe." Also, use linking words to connect ideas better.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it helps me understand their emotions better and notice non-verbal cues. Moreover, conversations in smaller groups feel more personal, comfortable, and safe.

Sugestão: Improve sentence flow and grammar. For example, "face to face" should be "face-to-face," and "make me harder to focus" should be "make it harder for me to focus." Use linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because online meetings or video calls often have slight delays, which can be frustrating and make it harder for me to focus and engage in the conversation.

Sugestão: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and plural forms. For example, "lead" should be "leads," and "win win situations" should be "win-win situations." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually give positive suggestions and advice, which always leads to win-win situations. Therefore, I avoid arguments to maintain a friendly and peaceful relationship with my friends.

× Yes, I really enjoy having small talks with my friends as it can updates each other about what's going on with my with our lives.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy having small talks with my friends as it can update each other about what's going on with our lives.

The verb 'updates' is incorrectly used in the present participle form after the modal verb 'can'. After 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'update' is correct instead of 'updates'. Also, 'my with our lives' is redundant; 'our lives' suffices.

× my friends often share with me their challenges face when doing university assignments and I listen carefully to them and hopefully gave them some suggestions and advices that make them.

✓ my friends often share with me their challenges faced when doing university assignments and I listen carefully to them and hopefully give them some suggestions and advice that help them.

The verb 'face' should be in past participle form 'faced' to describe the challenges. 'Gave' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'give'. 'Advices' is incorrect as 'advice' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. 'Make them' is vague; 'help them' is clearer.

× I usually will avoid arguments because I want to maintain a friendly and peaceful relationship between us.

✓ I usually avoid arguments because I want to maintain a friendly and peaceful relationship between us.

The phrase 'usually will avoid' is redundant; 'usually avoid' is more natural and grammatically correct. 'Usually' already indicates frequency, so 'will' is unnecessary here.

× In a smaller group the conversation will be more personal, comfortable, and safety.

✓ In a smaller group the conversation will be more personal, comfortable, and safe.

'Safety' is a noun but the sentence requires an adjective to describe the conversation. The correct adjective is 'safe'.

× I would choose face to face definitely as online meetings or video call often have a slight delay which can be quite frustrating and make me harder to focus and engage in the conversation.

✓ I would definitely choose face-to-face communication as online meetings or video calls often have a slight delay which can be quite frustrating and make it harder for me to focus and engage in the conversation.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. 'Video call' should be plural 'video calls' to match 'online meetings'. 'Make me harder' is incorrect; it should be 'make it harder for me' to express difficulty properly.

× I often give positive suggestions and advice and it always lead to a win win situations.

✓ I often give positive suggestions and advice and it always leads to win-win situations.

'Lead' should be 'leads' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Win win' should be hyphenated as 'win-win'. 'Situations' is plural, so 'a' should be removed.