Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中有较多语气词和重复，表达不够流畅自然。建议减少填充词，简洁明了地表达观点，并且注意语法结构的完整性。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends about various topics such as new trends, daily activities, and people we meet, especially since we are no longer students and have different work experiences.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点。

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends every day about my daily life because I feel nervous about many things and talking to them helps me feel better.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议明确表达偏好，使用连词使句子更流畅，并避免语法错误。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more lively and interesting, although sometimes I also talk with one friend when possible.

Sugestão: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议直接表达偏好，说明原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel nervous and pressured when talking face-to-face, and online chatting helps me feel more comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并用具体例子说明。

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about different opinions, like the colors we like or fashion trends. For example, I might not like a color, but my friend thinks it's good, and I usually accept her opinion.

× Like we because we are not students anymore and she was working and.

✓ Like we are not students anymore and she is working.

这里的主语是复数“we”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是省略或错误使用。原句中“she was working”与前文主语不一致，且时态不合适。应保持时态一致，使用现在时。

× I usually try to my friend I think maybe every day because I'm just like a person was always always needed friends and without them I even couldn't S because I have nervous about a lot of things.

✓ I usually try to contact my friends maybe every day because I'm just a person who always needs friends and without them I couldn't be because I am nervous about a lot of things.

“try to my friend”缺少动词，应为“try to contact my friends”。“I have nervous”应为“I am nervous”，因为“nervous”是形容词，需用系动词“am”。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整以符合英语表达习惯。

× I usually try to my friend I think maybe every day because I'm just like a person was always always needed friends and without them I even couldn't S because I have nervous about a lot of things.

✓ I usually try to contact my friends maybe every day because I'm just a person who always needs friends and without them I couldn't be because I am nervous about a lot of things.

“friends”是复数，动词“needs”应与单数主语“a person”一致，使用第三人称单数形式。

× So every day I will be communicating with my friends about what I daily life.

✓ So every day I will be communicating with my friends about my daily life.

“about what I daily life”中“what”多余，应直接用“about my daily life”。

× I would say I prefer to chat with a group of people because uh-huh. In fact, for me, I always communicate with my one friends, but he have some more emergency things to do so ** *** couldn't to rapidly repeat me.

✓ I would say I prefer to chat with a group of people because, uh-huh, in fact, I always communicate with my one friend, but he has some urgent things to do so he couldn't reply to me quickly.

“my one friends”应为“my one friend”，因为“one”表示单数，后面应接单数名词。“he have”应为“he has”，主谓一致。

× he have some more emergency things to do so ** *** couldn't to rapidly repeat me.

✓ he has some urgent things to do so he couldn't reply to me quickly.

“couldn't to rapidly repeat me”表达错误，应为“couldn't reply to me quickly”。“repeat”用法不当，应使用“reply”。

× I prefer to communicate in social media because I have I say I have some nervous about the people to face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I feel nervous about meeting people face to face.

“communicate in social media”应为“communicate via social media”。“have some nervous”应为“feel nervous”。“to face to face”应为“face to face”。

× I have feel more pressure and I think why we need to face to face.

✓ I feel more pressure and I think why do we need to meet face to face.

“I have feel”错误，应为“I feel”。“why we need to face to face”结构不完整，应为“why do we need to meet face to face”。

× I think if someone say some words you will feel all this a little bit.

✓ I think if someone says something, you will feel it a little bit.

“say some words”应为“says something”。“feel all this a little bit”表达不清，应为“feel it a little bit”。

× Yes, I have so many things about my friends and we have a different options like uh, the color we like, uh, about this trend, uh, this winter's trend eyes would say the color was not of my type, but she say it's kind of good.

✓ Yes, I have so many things with my friends and we have different opinions like, uh, the colors we like, uh, about this trend, uh, this winter's trend. I would say the color was not my type, but she says it's kind of good.

“a different options”应为“different opinions”，名词和冠词使用错误。“she say”应为“she says”，主谓一致。

× Yes, I have so many things about my friends and we have a different options like uh, the color we like, uh, about this trend, uh, this winter's trend eyes would say the color was not of my type, but she say it's kind of good. I don't think it's not a bad idea and I think OK, fine.

✓ Yes, I have many things with my friends and we have different opinions like the colors we like, about this trend, this winter's trend. I would say the color was not my type, but she says it's kind of good. I don't think it's a bad idea and I think, OK, fine.

“I don't think it's not a bad idea”中双重否定错误，应为“I don't think it's a bad idea”。句子中代词和表达需调整以符合英语习惯。