Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and unclear in places. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like chatting with friends, using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. It feels like a good therapy that makes me more satisfied and happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to be more specific about the topics you discuss and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Exemplo: I usually chat about my daily routine with my friends in our WhatsApp group. We often share updates and discuss various topics whenever we find free time, regardless of day or night.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by structuring it better. Start with a clear preference, then explain with specific reasons and use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to show contrast.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people sometimes; however, it mostly depends on my mood. Usually, I spend more time chatting with one friend, where we discuss our daily routines, shopping, and dramas, which makes us happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like 'nowadays'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'but' effectively to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to share experiences and emotions more fully. However, since we are far apart, social media is the best way for us to stay connected.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'something on some topic'. Use specific examples and linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to explain.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue, especially when we share different opinions. For example, last week we disagreed on a topic during a discussion, which is common among friends.

× Yes I do like chatting with friends as chatting with friends is one of the best therapy I feel like when do you do chatting with your friends and family it relaxes your mind and give you refreshing and you can become more satisfied and.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends as chatting with friends is one of the best therapies. I feel like when you chat with your friends and family, it relaxes your mind, gives you refreshment, and you can become more satisfied.

The word 'therapy' should be plural 'therapies' because it refers to one among many types of therapy. Also, 'give you refreshing' is incorrect; it should be 'gives you refreshment' to use the correct noun form. Additionally, the sentence structure was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I usually chat to my daily routine with my friends as we are a group of friends in the WhatsApp group and it's becoming our habit to chat together whenever we get time.

✓ I usually chat about my daily routine with my friends as we are a group in a WhatsApp group and it's become our habit to chat together whenever we get time.

The verb 'chat' is followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'in the WhatsApp group' is better as 'in a WhatsApp group' since it is not a specific group previously mentioned. 'It's becoming' is corrected to 'it's become' to indicate a habitual action.

× Uh, whether it's day or night doesn't depend.

✓ Uh, it doesn't depend on whether it's day or night.

The sentence structure was incorrect. The phrase 'doesn't depend' needs an object, so 'on whether it's day or night' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, the word order was adjusted for clarity.

× Whenever we are free, we all the friends start chatting and discuss.

✓ Whenever we are free, all of us friends start chatting and discussing.

The phrase 'we all the friends' is incorrect; it should be 'all of us friends'. Also, 'discuss' should be in the '-ing' form 'discussing' to match the parallel structure with 'chatting'.

× Yes, I would prefer to chat with a group of people sometimes.

✓ Yes, I sometimes prefer to chat with a group of people.

The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed before the verb 'prefer' for natural English word order.

× It depends mostly on my mood, but I believe I spend most of the time by chatting with my friend.

✓ It mostly depends on my mood, but I believe I spend most of the time chatting with my friend.

The phrase 'spend most of the time by chatting' is incorrect; 'spend time chatting' is the correct form without 'by'. Also, 'mostly depends' is a more natural word order.

× We almost discuss our daily routine, our shopping, our drama and we feel happy.

✓ We almost always discuss our daily routines, our shopping, our dramas, and we feel happy.

'Daily routine' and 'drama' should be plural to indicate multiple instances or types. Also, 'almost' is better as 'almost always' to clarify frequency.

× I would prefer to communicate face to face as I believe when we talk or gossips face to face we share more experiences and with full of emotions.

✓ I would prefer to communicate face to face as I believe when we talk or gossip face to face, we share more experiences and are full of emotions.

'Gossips' should be 'gossip' as a verb. Also, 'with full of emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'are full of emotions'. Commas were added for clarity.

× But nowadays as we both are far away from each other so social media is the best option for us to connect nowadays.

✓ But nowadays, as we are both far away from each other, social media is the best option for us to connect.

The phrase 'we both are far away from each other' is better as 'we are both far away from each other'. Also, 'nowadays' was repeated unnecessarily and removed for conciseness.

× Yes, I believe sometime we started arguing with each other.

✓ Yes, I believe sometimes we start arguing with each other.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Started' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so 'start' in present tense is appropriate.

× Uh, for example like last week we were discussing something on some topic and we started arguing and this mostly happened whenever we share our thoughts together.

✓ Uh, for example, last week we were discussing a topic and started arguing; this mostly happens whenever we share our thoughts together.

'For example like' is redundant; 'for example' suffices. 'Something on some topic' is vague; 'a topic' is clearer. 'This mostly happened' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'this mostly happens' is correct.

× And she likes and I dislike so this is the common thing in friends.

✓ She likes it and I dislike it, so this is common among friends.

The pronouns 'it' are needed after 'likes' and 'dislike' to specify the object. 'The common thing in friends' is better expressed as 'common among friends'.