Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cavabınız təbii və səmimidir, lakin bəzi cümlələrdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha qısa və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin, məsələn, 'I am an extrovert person' yerinə 'I am an extrovert' deyə bilərsiniz. Həmçinin, mövzunu daha konkret və əlaqəli saxlamaq üçün əlavə dəstəkləyici məlumatlar verin.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I am an extrovert. We often talk about my hobbies and daily routine, which helps me socialize and make new friends.

Sugestão: Cavabınız mövzuya uyğun və məzmunludur, lakin bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və cümlə quruluşunda təkrarlamalar var. Daha axıcı və əlaqəli danışmaq üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin və cümlələri daha qısa saxlayın.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine and hobbies. Since we are all pursuing medical degrees, we often discuss medical topics, which makes our conversations very interesting.

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha qısa və konkret edin, keçid sözlərindən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha yaxşı əlaqələndirin.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because, as an extrovert, I enjoy sharing experiences and hearing different stories. It’s great to have many friends and diverse conversations.

Sugestão: Cavabınızda çoxlu 'uh' kimi sözlər var, bu da təbii danışığı azaldır. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Həmçinin, 'express my soul' ifadəsi yerinə daha uyğun ifadələr seçin.

Exemplo: Both ways are good, but I prefer face-to-face communication because it’s easier to express my feelings. However, I also use social media to stay connected with friends.

Sugestão: Cümlənizdə təkrarlamalar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha qısa və aydın cavab verin, əlavə olaraq səbəbləri daha konkret ifadə edin.

Exemplo: I don’t like arguing with my close friends or relatives because it causes negative emotions and affects our relationship.

× I really enjoy chatting with my friends, with my surrounding, because I am really extrovert person and I love to discuss different topics, especially about how my hobbies and about my daily life and the routine.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends and my surroundings because I am a really extroverted person and I love to discuss different topics, especially about my hobbies and my daily life and routine.

The phrase 'with my surrounding' is incorrect; it should be 'and my surroundings' to indicate the people or environment around. Also, 'extrovert person' should be 'extroverted person' to use the correct adjective form. The preposition 'about how my hobbies' is incorrect; it should be 'about my hobbies' without 'how'.

× I really enjoy talking with my friend about my daily routine and my hobbies.

✓ I really enjoy talking with my friends about my daily routine and my hobbies.

The singular 'friend' is inconsistent with the context where multiple friends are implied. Using the plural 'friends' is appropriate here.

× And since they also going to pursue a medical degree, it's really interesting to talk with them about medical profession.

✓ And since they are also going to pursue a medical degree, it's really interesting to talk with them about the medical profession.

The verb 'going' requires the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'medical profession' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the profession.

× I really love chatting with a group of people because we can share our experience, our life stories and it's really enjoyable to listen to different stories and ideas.

✓ I really love chatting with a group of people because we can share our experiences, our life stories and it's really enjoyable to listen to different stories and ideas.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the plural context of sharing multiple experiences.

× And I really love that idea that I can be in a friendship with, with a lot of friends and with a lot of people.

✓ And I really love the idea that I can have friendships with a lot of friends and a lot of people.

The phrase 'be in a friendship with' is awkward; 'have friendships with' is more natural. Also, 'that idea that' is better as 'the idea that' for clarity.

× Uh, they're both good way to communicate, but uh, I prefer to talk with the people face to face, uh, because it's easier for me to express my soul, to express my feelings through, uh, offline communication.

✓ Uh, they're both good ways to communicate, but uh, I prefer to talk with people face to face, uh, because it's easier for me to express my soul, to express my feelings through, uh, offline communication.

The phrase 'good way' should be plural 'good ways' because it refers to two methods. Also, 'the people' is better as 'people' in general.

× But in order to stay connected with some people, I also use social media for communication and for chatting.

✓ But in order to stay connected to some people, I also use social media for communication and chatting.

The correct preposition with 'stay connected' is 'to' rather than 'with'. Also, 'for chatting' is sufficient without 'for' repeated.