Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes of course, I really like talking with my friends because I think chatting can help us become more closer and my friends always help me to solve my problems from my life and we almost talk about just chatting online everyday.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I surely would talk about everything on the system and honestly we just always talk about some gothic from our school and of course between some **** star and umm, she always helped me everything. So umm we talk about some study.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
But personally I prefer chatting with my close friend because I often feel uncomfortable when talking to a large group of people. So I think why talk with my close friends? I can express myself. So personally I just prefer talk with my close friend.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Personally I prefer chatting face to face because I think it can more easier express my feeling and like I can use some body language to express. So I just prefer face to face.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Yes, of course, sometimes I do argue with my friends because we have different opinion on some topics. However, I really enjoy those moments because it can help us understand each other better and just become more closer.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“more closer”应为“closer”,且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并注意语法准确性。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us become closer. They often support me with my personal problems, and we usually chat online every day.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议明确主题,使用连词使句子更连贯,并提供具体的聊天话题。
Exemplo: I usually chat about school life, our favorite celebrities, and sometimes we discuss study-related topics. My friend often helps me with difficult subjects.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和重复,如“why talk with my close friends?”不合适。建议使用更自然的表达,避免重复,并注意语法。
Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a close friend because I feel more comfortable and can express myself better than in a large group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如“can more easier”应为“is easier to”。句子结构简单且重复。建议改进语法,丰富表达,并避免重复。
Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to express my feelings and use body language to convey my emotions.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误,如“different opinion”应为“different opinions”,“more closer”应为“closer”。建议注意复数形式和比较级的正确使用。
Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I enjoy these moments as they help us understand each other better and become closer.
× I really like talking with my friends because I think chatting can help us become more closer and my friends always help me to solve my problems from my life and we almost talk about just chatting online everyday.
✓ I really like talking with my friends because I think chatting can help us become closer and my friends always help me solve my problems in my life and we almost always chat online every day.
“more closer”是错误的比较级用法,正确用法是“closer”。“problems from my life”应改为“problems in my life”,介词使用错误。动词“help me to solve”中“to”可省略,且“almost talk about just chatting online everyday”表达不自然,改为“almost always chat online every day”更合适。
× my friends always help me to solve my problems from my life
✓ my friends always help me solve my problems in my life
介词“from”用错了,应该用“in”来表示“生活中的问题”。
× we almost talk about just chatting online everyday
✓ we almost always chat online every day
“almost talk about just chatting”表达不自然且量词使用错误,应改为“almost always chat”表示“几乎总是聊天”。
× we just always talk about some gothic from our school
✓ we always just talk about some gossip from our school
“some gothic”应为“some gossip”,且“just always”词序不当,应为“always just”。
× she always helped me everything
✓ she always helps me with everything
“helped”时态错误,应为现在时“helps”;“help me everything”缺少介词,应为“help me with everything”。
× So personally I just prefer talk with my close friend.
✓ So personally I just prefer to talk with my close friend.
动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to talk”,缺少“to”。
× So personally I just prefer talk with my close friend.
✓ So personally I just prefer to talk with my close friends.
“close friend”应为复数“close friends”,因为前文提到“friends”,保持一致。
× I think it can more easier express my feeling
✓ I think it can more easily express my feelings
“more easier”是双重比较级,应改为“more easily”;“express my feeling”应为复数“feelings”。
× I think it can more easier express my feeling and like I can use some body language to express.
✓ I think it can more easily express my feelings and I can use some body language to express them.
“like”用法不当,应改为“and”;“express”后应有宾语,补充“them”指代“feelings”。
× sometimes I do argue with my friends because we have different opinion on some topics.
✓ sometimes I do argue with my friends because we have different opinions on some topics.
“different opinion”应为复数“different opinions”,因为有多个不同的观点。
× it can help us understand each other better and just become more closer.
✓ it can help us understand each other better and just become closer.
“more closer”是错误的比较级用法,应为“closer”。