Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples with clear linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my daily experiences. For example, I often talk about new foods I have tried or interesting things that happened during the day.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about food and travel because we all enjoy trying new meals and planning trips together.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reason with specific details and linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it creates a lively atmosphere and allows everyone to share their opinions.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and filled with hesitations. Provide a clear preference and explain why with specific reasons and examples, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more refreshing and relaxing. For instance, meeting in person allows us to enjoy each other's company better than chatting online.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more organized. Use linking words to explain the situation and provide specific details to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about where to travel. For example, they say they don't have enough money, but I know they have saved some, which causes disagreements.

× I like and share some my life, my daily life such uh, for example, uh, it could some foods I want to share my friend or I meet some something.

✓ I like to share some of my life, my daily life, such as, for example, some foods I want to share with my friend or when I meet someone.

The phrase 'some my life' is incorrect; it should be 'some of my life' to properly quantify the noun. Also, 'such uh' should be 'such as' to introduce examples. 'It could some foods' is ungrammatical; it should be 'some foods'. Additionally, 'share my friend' should be 'share with my friend' to use the correct preposition. 'I meet some something' is unclear and should be 'when I meet someone' for clarity and correctness.

× I like and share some my life, my daily life such uh, for example, uh, it could some foods I want to share my friend or I meet some something.

✓ I like to share some of my life, my daily life, such as, for example, some foods I want to share with my friend or when I meet someone.

The pronoun usage is incorrect in 'share my friend'; it should be 'share with my friend' to correctly indicate the recipient of sharing. Also, 'I meet some something' is vague and incorrect; 'when I meet someone' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Oh, because I usually chat about food and travel with my friend.

✓ Oh, because I usually chat about food and travel with my friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. Using singular 'friend' implies only one friend, which is less likely in this context.

× Uh, because. If we are out, it's meal and we all love.

✓ Uh, because if we are out, it's usually mealtime and we all love it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Combining the clauses and adding 'usually' and 'mealtime' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'it's meal' is incorrect; 'it's mealtime' is the correct expression.

× Well, I think I prefer to chat with a group people, uh, because, uh, I want, umm, retirement atmosphere and we can't give a, a kind of opinion.

✓ Well, I think I prefer to chat with a group of people, uh, because, uh, I want a relaxed atmosphere and we can give different kinds of opinions.

The phrase 'a group people' is missing the preposition 'of' and should be 'a group of people'. 'Retirement atmosphere' is incorrect; likely intended 'relaxed atmosphere'. Also, 'we can't give a, a kind of opinion' is incorrect; it should be 'we can give different kinds of opinions' to express the idea properly.

× Well, I think I prefer to chat with a group people, uh, because, uh, I want, umm, retirement atmosphere and we can't give a, a kind of opinion.

✓ Well, I think I prefer to chat with a group of people, uh, because, uh, I want a relaxed atmosphere and we can give different kinds of opinions.

The preposition 'with' is correctly used, but 'a group people' lacks the preposition 'of' after 'group'. Also, 'give a kind of opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'give different kinds of opinions' to indicate variety.

× I like and share some my life, my daily life such uh, for example, uh, it could some foods I want to share my friend or I meet some something.

✓ I like to share some of my life, my daily life, such as, for example, some foods I want to share with my friend or when I meet someone.

The phrase 'share my friend' is missing the preposition 'with' to indicate the person with whom something is shared. Correct usage is 'share with my friend'.

× Yes I do because when I talk about with my friend to where to travel in and and then they always told me they don't have money but I know they have in stock money.

✓ Yes, I do because when I talk with my friends about where to travel, they always tell me they don't have money but I know they have money saved.

The pronoun 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'they'. Also, 'talk about with' is incorrect; it should be 'talk with' or 'talk about'. The phrase 'have in stock money' is unnatural; 'have money saved' is clearer and more idiomatic.

× Yes I do because when I talk about with my friend to where to travel in and and then they always told me they don't have money but I know they have in stock money.

✓ Yes, I do because when I talk with my friends about where to travel, they always tell me they don't have money but I know they have money saved.

The verb 'told' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'tell' to match 'always' indicating habitual action.