Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more structured and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about what you chat about and how it makes you feel.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time. We often share different stories and talk about our happy and sad memories. This helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and lacks specific details. Try to answer directly and add examples of topics you discuss. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends during my free time, such as in the evenings or on holidays. We talk about our daily lives, work, and sometimes our future plans.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer both chatting one-on-one and in groups because each has its own benefits. For example, one-on-one chats allow deeper conversations, while group chats are more lively and fun.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with examples. Use linking words to organize your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face, especially for important topics, because it helps me understand emotions better. However, for casual conversations, social media is convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide reasons for your answer. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. For instance, our plans often do not match, which leads to disagreements.

× when we chat all of together, we gossiping uh, a different different thing and we sharing our happy memories, good memories or bad memories when uh, I share my.

✓ when we chat all together, we gossip about different things and share our happy memories, good memories, or bad memories.

The verbs 'gossiping' and 'sharing' are incorrectly used in the present participle form without auxiliary verbs. The correct form is the base verb with appropriate prepositions or auxiliary verbs. Also, 'all of together' is incorrect; it should be 'all together'. Use 'gossip about' instead of 'gossiping'. In English (Bangladesh): 'gossiping' ar 'sharing' ekhane thik vabe use kora hoy nai, eita base verb hote hobe. 'all of together' er bodole 'all together' use korte hobe. 'gossip' er sathe 'about' lagbe.

× I usually chat with my friends some of my free time and when I I am not busy in my work life that could be night time or afternoon or holiday afternoon.

✓ I usually chat with my friends during my free time, especially when I am not busy with my work life; that could be at night, in the afternoon, or on a holiday afternoon.

The prepositions 'some of' and 'in' are incorrectly used. 'During' is the correct preposition for time periods. Also, 'busy in my work life' should be 'busy with my work life'. Time expressions like 'night time' and 'afternoon' need appropriate prepositions like 'at' or 'in'. In English (Bangladesh): 'some of my free time' er bodole 'during my free time' thik. 'busy in' er bodole 'busy with' use korte hobe. Time er age 'at' or 'in' lagbe.

× Is very on person to person mode.

✓ It is very much in person-to-person mode.

The sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect phrasing. 'Is' should be 'It is'. Also, 'person to person mode' should be hyphenated as 'person-to-person mode'. In English (Bangladesh): 'Is' er age subject 'It' lagbe. 'person to person' ke 'person-to-person' hishabe likhte hoy.

× I prefer uh both are important 'cause when I uh chat group uh with group of people uh I gossiping uh a thing uh, a lot of people prefer a different different thing uh to think I.

✓ I prefer both because when I chat with a group of people, I gossip about things. A lot of people prefer different things to think about.

'I gossiping' is incorrect; it should be 'I gossip' or 'I am gossiping'. Also, 'chat group uh with group of people' is awkward; it should be 'chat with a group of people'. The phrase 'a different different thing uh to think I' is unclear and corrected to 'different things to think about'. In English (Bangladesh): 'I gossiping' thik na, 'I gossip' hobe. 'chat group uh with group of people' er bodole 'chat with a group of people' thik. 'different different thing uh to think I' er mane bujhte problem, tai 'different things to think about' kora holo.

× Is very which topic I sharing this mom if any topic help to communicate face to face so it more important to communicate face to face yeah and if I prefer.

✓ It depends on the topic I am sharing. If any topic helps to communicate face to face, then it is more important to communicate face to face. Yes, I prefer that.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Is very which topic I sharing this mom' is unclear and needs rephrasing. The sentence is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly with proper subject-verb agreement and sentence flow. In English (Bangladesh): Sentence ta boro bhabe bhanga, tai bujhte oshubidha. Subject ar verb thik moto use korte hobe, ar sentence ta clear korte hobe.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends because not all of time my mind and my friend mind was similar.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends because not all the time my mind and my friend's mind are similar.

The phrase 'not all of time' should be 'not all the time'. Also, 'was similar' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'are similar' because it is a general statement. In English (Bangladesh): 'not all of time' er bodole 'not all the time' thik. 'was similar' er bodole 'are similar' use korte hobe, karon eita general statement.

× Our many plans have not matched together.

✓ Many of our plans have not matched.

'Our many plans' is awkward; 'Many of our plans' is correct. Also, 'matched together' is redundant; 'matched' alone suffices. In English (Bangladesh): 'Our many plans' er bodole 'Many of our plans' thik. 'matched together' redundant, sudhu 'matched' use kora uchit.