Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more structured and concise. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words like 'uh'. Also, clarify what you mean by 'bare minimum times' as it is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we are all quite talkative. We often share our problems and discuss our academic achievements, which helps us support each other.

Sugestão: Good content and structure. To improve, avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'helps us connected' to 'helps us feel connected'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, including school, work, and hobbies. We often share entertaining stories or discuss recent movies and music, which helps us feel connected and relaxed after a busy day.

Sugestão: Avoid using unclear words like 'intricate' which may confuse the listener. Also, try to connect your ideas with linking words and avoid run-on sentences. Be more specific about why you prefer chatting with a small group.

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts. Although I have many friends, I usually spend time with just a few who I trust and enjoy being with.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer more clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to compare the two methods and explain your preference with specific reasons.

Exemplo: I enjoy both face-to-face communication and chatting via social media. However, I prefer in-person conversations because we can connect through eye contact and better understand each other's emotions.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and correct grammar mistakes such as 'discusses' to 'discuss'. Make your answer more concise and use linking words to explain your points clearly.

Exemplo: I believe arguments are a natural part of friendship. We sometimes argue about various topics, like movies we've watched or places we've visited, because we have different opinions.

× I love chatting with my friends my friends are quite chatty uh, just like me I love to spend my bare minimum times with my friends they always uh share their problems, their academic qualifications, their.

✓ I love chatting with my friends. My friends are quite chatty, just like me. I love to spend my bare minimum time with my friends. They always share their problems, their academic qualifications, and more.

The phrase 'bare minimum times' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the original sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Uh, the conversation helps us connected and relaxed after a busy day.

✓ Uh, the conversation helps us feel connected and relaxed after a busy day.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'feel' to correctly express the intended meaning. 'Connected' and 'relaxed' are adjectives describing the state after feeling.

× I enjoy their company and I roam with them.

✓ I enjoy their company and I hang out with them.

The verb 'roam' is not typically used to describe spending time socially with friends. 'Hang out' is the correct phrasal verb to express spending leisure time together.

× I love both It depends on how we are chatting like uh in person we chat a lot and in social media I do chat a lot with my friends umm in person because we connected through our eyes, we feel the emotions right there so.

✓ I love both. It depends on how we are chatting. Like, in person we chat a lot, and on social media I also chat a lot with my friends. In person, because we connect through our eyes, we feel the emotions right there.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'connected' should be 'connect' to maintain present tense. Preposition 'on' is used with 'social media' instead of 'in'.

× Uh, yes, we do argue in some of the topics that we umm, discusses, discuss and also not often, but we argue on the films we watched or the movies or the place that we went.

✓ Uh, yes, we do argue about some of the topics that we discuss, and also not often, but we argue about the films we watched, the movies, or the places that we went to.

The verb 'discusses' is incorrect because the subject 'we' requires the base form 'discuss'. Also, preposition 'about' is more appropriate than 'on' when talking about arguing topics. 'Place' should be plural 'places' to match 'films' and 'movies'. Added 'to' after 'went' for correct phrasal verb usage.