Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your thoughts clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after a stressful day at work, because it helps me relax and unwind, often over a glass of beer.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to start directly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I usually chat about sports with my friends; for instance, we often debate who the best striker is and discuss their recent goals, which keeps our conversations interesting since we all follow the games closely.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to concentrate, and the conversation becomes more personal, allowing me to express my thoughts clearly without hesitation.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your points flow better.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because meeting in person creates a stronger connection than interacting through a screen, which is important for building healthy relationships.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more precise linking words and correcting minor grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, we do argue sometimes when we have different opinions; however, we usually resolve our disagreements quickly because our friendship is more important than any small quarrel.

× About with friends I usually chat about sports with my friends.

✓ I usually chat about sports with my friends.

The phrase 'About with friends' at the beginning is redundant and incorrectly structured, causing confusion. Removing it clarifies the sentence and improves its grammatical correctness.

× We becomes more personal and I'm able to completely convey my thoughts without any hesitation.

✓ We become more personal and I'm able to completely convey my thoughts without any hesitation.

The subject 'We' is plural, so the verb should be 'become' instead of 'becomes' to agree in number. Using 'becomes' is incorrect subject-verb agreement.

× I definitely prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I definitely prefer to communicate face-to-face.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective to describe the manner of communication.

× I think when we meet a person it brings a stronger connection than looking at them through a screen.

✓ I think when we meet a person, it brings a stronger connection than looking at them through a screen.

A comma is needed after the introductory clause 'when we meet a person' to separate it from the main clause, improving readability and grammatical correctness.

× I think face to face communications are important to build healthy relationships.

✓ I think face-to-face communication is important to build healthy relationships.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated, and 'communication' is an uncountable noun here, so it should be singular without 's'. Also, 'communications' is incorrect in this context.

× However, we tend to resolve it sooner or later because what's important is our friendship than any small quarrel or quibble.

✓ However, we tend to resolve it sooner or later because what's more important is our friendship than any small quarrel or quibble.

The conjunction 'because' is used correctly, but the phrase 'what's important is our friendship than' is incomplete. Adding 'more' after 'what's' makes the comparison correct: 'what's more important is our friendship than...'