Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I am very enjoy' và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often use social networks like Facebook or Zalo, which allow us to stay in touch without any cost. However, I think it's also very important to meet and talk with them face-to-face sometimes.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như 'umm' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'share them with them'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Exemplo: When I was a student, I usually chatted with my friends about our university studies and shared information about our courses. Now that I am working, we often talk about various topics related to our jobs.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'only one friends' và nhiều từ thừa như 'umm'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nói tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because I have only a few close friends, and I usually talk to them individually rather than in a group.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như 'standings' không đúng, câu nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy và tránh câu ngắt quãng không hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because when we sit or stand in front of each other, we can talk more quickly and observe each other's facial expressions, which helps us share emotions better.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I am believe', 'have argue', 'small acumen'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng từ phù hợp và tránh từ thừa để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe that everyone experiences arguments with friends at some point in their life, including me. I think it's normal because sometimes we have different opinions, but usually, we resolve them peacefully in the end.

× Yes, I am very enjoy chatting with friends because nowadays we are using a lot of social network like Facebook or Zalo so we can chat with them all the time without losing any money.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because nowadays we use a lot of social networks like Facebook or Zalo so we can chat with them all the time without losing any money.

The phrase 'I am very enjoy' is incorrect because 'enjoy' is a verb and should not be used with 'am' in this way. Instead, use 'I really enjoy' to express the present simple tense for likes or preferences. Also, 'social network' should be plural 'social networks' because it refers to multiple platforms.

× But sometimes it's very very important that we can meet and talk to them in person.

✓ But sometimes it's very important that we meet and talk to them in person.

The phrase 'it's very very important that we can meet' is awkward. The modal verb 'can' is unnecessary here. Use 'that we meet' to express necessity or importance. Also, 'very very' is redundant; one 'very' is sufficient.

× In the past I when I was student, I usually chat with my friends about umm, about study at university and share them with them about tax at university.

✓ In the past, when I was a student, I usually chatted with my friends about studying at university and shared with them about tasks at university.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and missing articles. 'I was student' should be 'I was a student'. 'Usually chat' should be past tense 'usually chatted' to match 'in the past'. 'About study' should be 'about studying'. 'Share them with them' is incorrect; it should be 'shared with them'. Also, 'tax' is likely a typo for 'tasks' or 'topics'.

× But then I'm working now and I always chat with them about everything at work.

✓ But now I'm working and I always chat with them about everything at work.

The phrase 'But then I'm working now' is awkward. 'Then' is unnecessary when referring to the present. Use 'But now I'm working' to indicate current status. The rest is acceptable.

× I like to chat with only one friends better because I do not have a lot of bad friends, I only have several best friends and I umm, no, I normally chat with them uh, one by one, uh, and I prefer chat with one individual more.

✓ I like to chat with only one friend better because I do not have a lot of bad friends; I only have several best friends and I normally chat with them one by one, and I prefer chatting with one individual more.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'one' requires singular noun 'friend'. Also, 'prefer chat' should be 'prefer chatting' to use the gerund after 'prefer'. The sentence is long and can be improved with punctuation for clarity.

× I like to communicate face to face better because when we standings or sitting in front of each other, we can talk everything very quickly and then we can see their impression on their face and then we can share our emotion as well.

✓ I like to communicate face to face better because when we are standing or sitting in front of each other, we can talk about everything very quickly and then we can see their expressions on their faces and share our emotions as well.

'Standings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'standing'. 'Talk everything' should be 'talk about everything'. 'Impression on their face' should be 'expressions on their faces'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'our'.

× Yes, I am believe that in each person lifetime there will be a moment that we have argue with friends.

✓ Yes, I believe that in each person's lifetime there will be a moment when we argue with friends.

'I am believe' is incorrect; 'believe' is a verb and does not need 'am'. 'Each person lifetime' should be 'each person's lifetime' to show possession. 'Have argue' is incorrect; it should be 'argue' or 'have an argument'. 'That' should be 'when' to refer to time.

× But I think that it is very, very normal. But sometime we have different views about thing and we have a small acumen but that is fine at the end.

✓ But I think that it is very normal. Sometimes we have different views about things and we have small arguments but that is fine in the end.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'different views about'. 'A small acumen' is incorrect; likely intended 'a small argument' or 'disagreement'. 'At the end' should be 'in the end'.