Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually spend about half an hour each day talking to them because it helps me create and keep good memories.

Sugestão: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và lặp lại. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

Exemplo: When I chat with my friends, we usually talk about our vacations and share comments on various topics. We also exchange information about our lessons to help each other study better.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to focus on a specific topic and have a deeper conversation, unlike group chats where topics can be scattered.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng bằng các từ nối phù hợp.

Exemplo: Although I enjoy chatting online, I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me connect emotionally with others. Moreover, it also improves my communication skills.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói lắp.

Exemplo: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually share common interests and understand each other well.

× I spend about. 5/5 hour to to this and I think this is other way to keep memories.

✓ I spend about 5 hours doing this and I think this is another way to keep memories.

The word 'hour' should be plural 'hours' because the quantity is more than one. Also, 'to to this' is incorrect; it should be 'doing this' to express the activity. 'Other way' should be 'another way' to correctly indicate an alternative method.

× I spend about. 5/5 hour to to this and I think this is other way to keep memories.

✓ I spend about 5 hours doing this and I think this is another way to keep memories.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used twice; the correct form is 'doing this' to indicate the activity being performed.

× Oh why I chat with my friends. I often trust with my friend umm, messenger of vacations.

✓ Oh, when I chat with my friends, I often trust my friend, umm, messenger of vacations.

The sentence structure is awkward and 'trust with my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'trust my friend'. Also, 'friends' is plural but later 'friend' is singular; consistency is needed.

× Oh why I chat with my friends. I often trust with my friend umm, messenger of vacations.

✓ Oh, when I chat with my friends, I often trust my friend, umm, messenger of vacations.

The sentence lacks proper conjunction and punctuation. 'Oh why I chat' is incorrect; it should be 'Oh, when I chat'. Also, 'trust with' is incorrect; 'trust' does not require 'with'.

× We we often talk about umm, comments of topics or share information of our lessons.

✓ We often talk about, umm, comments on topics or share information about our lessons.

The prepositions 'of' are incorrectly used; the correct prepositions are 'comments on topics' and 'information about lessons'.

× I prefer task with my with only one friends because I share comments with each people so they have different topic about the chat.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because I share comments with each person, so they have different topics about the chat.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to 'only one'. 'Task' is incorrect; it should be 'talk'. 'Each people' is incorrect; it should be 'each person'. 'Topic' should be plural 'topics'.

× I prefer task with my with only one friends because I share comments with each people so they have different topic about the chat.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because I share comments with each person, so they have different topics about the chat.

The preposition 'with' is used redundantly and incorrectly. The phrase should be 'talk with only one friend'.

× Although I love Chad, I prefer to communicate face to face because it have connects feeling with people.

✓ Although I love chat, I prefer to communicate face to face because it has connected feelings with people.

'Chad' is a typo for 'chat'. 'It have' should be 'it has' for singular subject-verb agreement. 'Connects feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'connected feelings'.

× Although I love Chad, I prefer to communicate face to face because it have connects feeling with people.

✓ Although I love chat, I prefer to communicate face to face because it has connected feelings with people.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'; it should be 'has'.

× Moreover, it's also. Improve communicate. Communicate skill.

✓ Moreover, it also improves communication skills.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms. 'Improve' should be 'improves' to agree with 'it', and 'communicate skill' should be 'communication skills'.

× Moreover, it's also. Improve communicate. Communicate skill.

✓ Moreover, it also improves communication skills.

The phrase 'communicate skill' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'communication skills'.

× It is really because I often plays with umm, people who have come up with common with me.

✓ It is true because I often play with, umm, people who have things in common with me.

'Plays' should be 'play' to agree with the subject 'I'. 'Have come up with common with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have things in common with me'.

× It is really because I often plays with umm, people who have come up with common with me.

✓ It is true because I often play with, umm, people who have things in common with me.

The verb 'plays' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'play'.