Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to give a direct and complete response with clear reasons. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on making your answer natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts with them.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and does not directly address the question. Make sure to respond fully with specific details about the topics you discuss with friends.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily activities, hobbies, and plans for the weekend.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because we can share more personal stories about our day.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains hesitations and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: In my opinion, I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable and clear, although social media is also fun for staying connected.

Sugestão: Your answer is very brief and lacks detail. Try to expand your response by explaining why or giving examples to make it more engaging.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually when we have different opinions, but we always resolve our disagreements quickly.

× To Rihanna's I, uh, really enjoy chatting with friends because we, umm, Mabel.

✓ To be honest, I really enjoy chatting with friends because we, umm, share stories.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear references. 'To Rihanna's I' is incorrect and confusing. The correction uses 'I' properly as the subject and clarifies the meaning by replacing 'Mabel' with 'share stories' to make the sentence meaningful.

× Actually, I have a new thing for my life and I.

✓ Actually, I have something new in my life.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'I have a new thing for my life and I' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction completes the thought and uses proper preposition 'in' to indicate something new in life.

× To be honest umm interrupt person so I think umm chat people with only one friend because I have a only one friend so we we we chatting more stories about our day or.

✓ To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I have only one friend, so we chat more about our day.

The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect quantifiers ('a only one friend' should be 'only one friend'), redundant words, and unclear phrasing. The correction removes redundancies, corrects quantifier usage, and improves clarity and grammar.

× In my opinion, communicate with face to face. It's so wonderful and uh, confidently and understandable and comfortable. Our social media, it's too fun.

✓ In my opinion, communicating face-to-face is wonderful, confident, understandable, and comfortable. Social media is also fun.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('communicate with face to face' should be 'communicating face-to-face') and has awkward phrasing. The correction uses the gerund form 'communicating' and corrects preposition use, improving sentence flow and clarity.

× That's an interesting question for me. Well, I I sometimes argue with my friends and so that's all.

✓ That's an interesting question for me. Well, I sometimes argue with my friends, and that's all.

The original sentence has repetition ('I I') and an unnecessary conjunction 'and so' at the end. The correction removes repetition and simplifies the sentence for clarity and correctness.