Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngắt quãng không cần thiết, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý một cách mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through mobile phones. Since we have different schedules, messaging helps us stay connected easily.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngắt quãng như "uh", "umm" và nói rõ ràng, cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường trò chuyện. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily lives and routines since nothing special happens most days. We share small updates and experiences to keep in touch.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và chưa hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính rõ ràng và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại từ và hoàn thiện ý tưởng của mình.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with one close friend for deeper conversations, but other times I enjoy group chats for fun and sharing ideas.

Sugestão: Bạn nên giảm bớt các từ ngắt quãng và nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh những cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như "invisible screen connect".

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build a stronger and more genuine connection between people.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều từ ngắt quãng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên hoàn thiện ý tưởng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but most of the time we resolve our disagreements and maintain a good relationship.

× I love to spend time with my friends by testing uh, by setting by setting through mobile phones.

✓ I love spending time with my friends by texting, by chatting through mobile phones.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'Testing' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'texting'. Repetition 'by setting by setting' is a mistake and should be corrected to 'by chatting'.

× Therefore sending messages will have it will help will help us keep in touch with each other.

✓ Therefore, sending messages will help us keep in touch with each other.

The sentence contains redundant phrases 'will have it will help will help'. This redundancy causes confusion and breaks sentence structure. Simplifying to 'will help us' corrects the structure.

× we don't have uh, so much important occasion happen, uh, in a, in a day.

✓ we don't have so many important occasions happening in a day.

'Occasion' is countable, so 'so much' is incorrect; 'so many' should be used. Also, 'happen' should be in the present participle form 'happening' to fit the sentence.

× Therefore we, we only uh, talk about, uh.

✓ Therefore, we only talk about simple things.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a complement clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× Sometimes I love to talk with a specific friend, 11 specific one specific one specific friend.

✓ Sometimes I love to talk with a specific friend.

The phrase '11 specific one specific one specific friend' is repetitive and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'a specific friend'.

× And sometime I think that, uh, group chatting will will be.

✓ And sometimes I think that group chatting will be better.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repetition 'will will'. Adding 'better' completes the thought and corrects the structure.

× Well, I prefer to, uh, talk, uh, face to face because I believe that when we have real connection, uh, in, in real life, we can, uh, we can build and maintain like, uh, like an invisible screen con connect.

✓ Well, I prefer to talk face to face because I believe that when we have real connection in real life, we can build and maintain an invisible connection.

'Face to face' is correct without commas. 'Con connect' is incorrect; it should be 'connection'. The phrase 'like an invisible screen' is unclear and unnecessary, so it is removed for clarity.

× Well, yes, of course I sometimes I have some argument with my friends, uh, some, some, umm, some end in uh, happy, happy ending.

✓ Well, yes, of course I sometimes have some arguments with my friends, some of which end in a happy ending.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' because 'some' indicates more than one. The phrase is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× However, there's how, however they are uh, there are some argument that I.

✓ However, there are some arguments that I...

The sentence is incomplete and contains unclear phrases 'there's how, however they are uh'. 'Argument' should be plural 'arguments'. The sentence needs completion for clarity.