Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, instead of repeating 'like' and 'share', you can say: "I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and we often share funny stories and experiences from our lives."

Exemplo: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. We often share funny stories and interesting experiences from our daily lives, which makes our conversations enjoyable and meaningful.

Sugestão: Focus on organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more specific about the topics you discuss. For example, you can say: "I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives. On weekends, we share what we did during the week and new things we learned."

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives. For instance, on weekends, we share what we did during the week and discuss new things we have learned, which helps us stay connected despite our busy schedules.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily. For example: "I prefer chatting with a group of people because it offers different experiences, more knowledge, and funnier stories. I also learn more from others in a group setting."

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it offers different experiences and more knowledge. Additionally, group conversations often include funnier stories, and I can learn a lot from others.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer clearly with linking words and avoid filler words. Be specific about situations and reasons. For example: "It depends on the situation. For serious matters, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's reactions. However, for funny stories or when I am busy, I use social media."

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For serious matters, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see the other person's reactions. However, when sharing funny stories or if I am busy, I usually communicate via social media.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and using linking words. For example: "No, I don't argue with my friends because we understand each other well and avoid conflicts. We respect each other's opinions and prefer to keep our friendship peaceful."

Exemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends because we understand each other well and avoid conflicts. We respect each other's opinions and prefer to keep our friendship peaceful.

× I really like chatting with my friends it give me a relax and unwanted.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends; it gives me relaxation and comfort.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'gives' in third person singular form to agree in number. Also, 'a relax and unwanted' is incorrect; 'relaxation and comfort' better express the intended meaning.

× We like share some funny stories and experience for over over the lives and we always like to share some.

✓ We like to share some funny stories and experiences from our lives, and we always like to share more.

The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to share' for correct infinitive usage. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'stories'. 'For over over the lives' is unclear; 'from our lives' is appropriate.

× I usually chat with my friends like a daily, uh, daily lives, uh, daily lives because, uh, in weekend we share, uh, what we do in week days and, uh, what we learn new things about, uh, some life.

✓ I usually chat with my friends daily about our daily lives because on weekends we share what we did during weekdays and what new things we learned about life.

The adverb 'daily' should be placed correctly to modify 'chat'. 'Like a daily' is incorrect; 'daily' alone suffices. 'In weekend' should be 'on weekends'. 'Week days' should be 'weekdays'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And we share a lot of things in weekend because weekdays we have a headache work and we don't.

✓ And we share a lot of things on weekends because during weekdays we have stressful work and we don't have time.

'In weekend' should be 'on weekends'. 'Weekdays' need a preposition 'during'. 'Headache work' is incorrect; 'stressful work' or 'work that gives headaches' is better. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× I really like to share a group of people because it gives a different experience and give different new knowledgeable things and more funny stories and more.

✓ I really like to share with a group of people because it gives different experiences, new knowledge, more funny stories, and more.

'Share a group of people' is incorrect; it should be 'share with a group of people'. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Different new knowledgeable things' is awkward; 'new knowledge' is better.

× It depends on situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Situations' is plural but 'depends' is singular; better to use singular 'situation' with 'depends'. Also, 'the' article is needed before 'situation'.

× It's serious situation.

✓ It's a serious situation.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before 'serious situation' as it is a singular countable noun.

× I want to, uh, share in face to face because in, I want to see her face reaction, what they will react in a serious situations, uh, in funny stories like that.

✓ I want to share face to face because I want to see her facial reaction and how they will react in serious situations, like funny stories.

'Share in face to face' is incorrect; 'share face to face' is correct. 'Face reaction' should be 'facial reaction'. 'In a serious situations' should be 'in serious situations' without 'a' and plural 'situations'.

× I will share in social media because it's, I, I'm in headache work and I'm in busy.

✓ I will share on social media because I have stressful work and I'm busy.

'Share in social media' should be 'share on social media'. 'I'm in headache work' is incorrect; 'I have stressful work' is better. 'I'm in busy' is incorrect; 'I'm busy' is correct.

× Any schedules I will share in.

✓ Whenever I have time in my schedule, I will share.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is restructured to express the intended meaning clearly.

× No, I don't argue with my friends and no matters to argue with my friends.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends and there is no reason to argue with them.

'No matters to argue' is incorrect; 'there is no reason to argue' is correct. Also, 'with my friends' repeated is redundant; 'with them' is better.

× They will already know what I want to do and I know what they want to do and we we avoid that things and we don't do that.

✓ They already know what I want to do, and I know what they want to do, so we avoid those things and don't do them.

'We we' is a repetition error. 'That things' should be 'those things' to agree in number. 'Do that' should be 'do them' to refer to plural 'things'.

× Such a stupid things we didn't do to them and we don't argue.

✓ We don't do such stupid things to them, and we don't argue.

'Such a stupid things' is incorrect; 'such stupid things' is correct because 'things' is plural and 'such' does not take 'a' before plural nouns.