Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because they listen attentively and offer helpful advice when I need it.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to be more specific and avoid filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I usually chat about makeup, skincare, and fashion since my friends and I share these common interests.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Also, explain why one-on-one chatting is better for you with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's easier to understand each other and the conversation is less chaotic.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains vague expressions like 'you know' and 'more advanced'. Try to be specific and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for clearer understanding and feels more personal than social media.

Sugestão: Your answer is direct but could be improved by using more formal language and providing a bit more explanation with linking words.

Exemplo: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar interests and mindsets, which helps us avoid conflicts.

× I usually chat about makeup, skin care and fashion with my friends because me and my friends have common interests and be like fashion, makeup and all those *****.

✓ I usually chat about makeup, skin care and fashion with my friends because my friends and I have common interests like fashion, makeup and all those things.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the sentence; the correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'be like' is incorrect here; it should be 'like' to express similarity. The phrase 'all those *****' is unclear and should be replaced with 'all those things' for clarity.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's more understanding and and it's not a chaos.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is more understanding and it is not chaotic.

The phrase 'more understanding' is acceptable but could be clearer; however, 'it's not a chaos' is incorrect because 'chaos' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article 'a'. Instead, use the adjective 'chaotic' to describe the situation.