Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct expressions. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are clear and coherent. For example, use 'I enjoy chatting with my friends and often send emails to learn about their hobbies and families. It is exciting.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often send emails to learn about their hobbies and family life, which I find very exciting.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I usually talk about movies and sometimes debate characters or scenes with my friends, which helps improve our communication.'

Exemplo: I usually talk about movies and sometimes debate the characters or scenes with my friends, which helps us communicate better.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Be clear about your reasons and use linking words. For example, 'I prefer chatting in groups because it allows me to communicate more and learn about many people's experiences, which I find very interesting.'

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in groups because it allows me to communicate more and learn about many people's experiences, which I find very interesting.

Sugestão: Use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand my friends' feelings better and is more enjoyable.'

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand my friends' feelings better and is more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Express your ideas more directly. For example, 'I try to avoid arguments because they can become serious. Instead, I prefer discussing exciting topics like movies or hobbies.'

Exemplo: I try to avoid arguments because they can become serious. Instead, I prefer discussing exciting topics like movies or hobbies.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

The sentence refers to chatting with more than one friend, so the plural form 'friends' should be used instead of the singular 'friend' to match the context.

× I always send an e-mail with my friend because I like to know about friends such as their hobby or family.

✓ I always send an e-mail to my friends because I like to know about their hobbies or families.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'send an e-mail to' is the correct phrase. Also, 'friends' should be plural to match the context, and 'hobby' and 'family' should be pluralized to 'hobbies' and 'families' to refer to multiple friends.

× It was excited.

✓ It was exciting.

The adjective 'excited' describes a feeling of a person, but here the speaker wants to describe the experience or event, so 'exciting' is the correct adjective form.

× I usually talk about movies and I dispute about the character or scene with my friend and talking about movie is spread the communication so very good.

✓ I usually talk about movies and I argue about the characters or scenes with my friends, and talking about movies helps to improve communication, so it is very good.

The verb 'dispute' is not commonly used in this context; 'argue' is more appropriate. The preposition 'about' is correct after 'argue'. 'Character' and 'scene' should be plural to match 'movies'. 'Talking about movie is spread the communication so very good' is ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'talking about movies helps to improve communication, so it is very good' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to chat with group because I'm not productive.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group because I'm more productive.

The noun 'group' requires an article 'a' here. Also, the sentence context suggests the speaker is more productive when chatting with a group, so 'not productive' is likely a mistake and corrected to 'more productive'.

× If there are a lot of people, then I want to know many people things.

✓ If there are a lot of people, then I want to know many people's things.

The phrase 'many people things' is incorrect; it should be 'many people's things' to indicate possession. However, a better phrase might be 'I want to know many things about people' for clarity.

× I'd like to communicate face to face because I don't know what the friend feelings, so if I can talk with talk to face to face, it's easy for understand about friend and it's more enjoyable for me.

✓ I'd like to communicate face to face because I don't know how my friends feel, so if I can talk face to face, it's easier to understand my friends and it's more enjoyable for me.

The phrase 'the friend feelings' is incorrect; it should be 'how my friends feel'. The phrase 'talk with talk to face to face' is redundant and ungrammatical; corrected to 'talk face to face'. 'Easy for understand about friend' is incorrect; corrected to 'easier to understand my friends'.

× Not to worry, argument is always umm, become serious I think.

✓ Not to worry, arguments always become serious, I think.

The article 'an' is missing before 'argument' if singular, but plural 'arguments' fits better here. The phrase 'become serious' should be 'become serious' without 'umm'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× So I want I would like to talk uh, more exciting topics.

✓ So I would like to talk about more exciting topics.

The phrase 'I want I would like to' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'I would like to'. The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' before the object.

× So I always talk about a movie was seeing their hobby and so on.

✓ So I always talk about movies I have seen, their hobbies, and so on.

The phrase 'a movie was seeing' is ungrammatical; it should be 'movies I have seen' to indicate past experience. 'Hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' to match the plural subject.