Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro, jar karone answer ta natural lage na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ar clear vabe express korte. Apni 'and' er por comma dite paren, ar 'which is really helpful' er jaygay 'which will be useful' use korte paren. Erokom kichu chhoto chhoto sentence diye answer ta aro natural hobe.

Exemplo: Yes, I often like chatting with my friends because it is a convenient way to communicate. Also, chatting helps me improve my typing speed, which will be useful if I work in a computer-related job in the future.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e onek filler words (uh, like) ache, ja answer ke natural o effective korte badha day. Apni chesta korun filler words komate. Ar sentence gulo ke aro specific korte paren, jemon kon dhoroner daily activities niye kotha hoy. Erokom kichu details add korle answer ta bhalo hobe.

Exemplo: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily activities, such as our plans for the day or what we want to do during the weekend.

Sugestão: Apni answer e onek 'uh' use korechen, ja answer ke natural lage na. Apni chesta korun filler words komate. Ar sentence gulo ke aro shundor vabe link korte paren, jemon 'because' er por aro bistarito karon dite paren. Erokom kichu chhoto chhoto sentence diye answer ta aro natural hobe.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can learn many things from them. Also, sharing my feelings with a group helps me reduce stress.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek confused. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shundor vabe structure korte, ar filler words komate. Apni 'opponent or opposite people' er jaygay 'other person' use korte paren. Erokom kichu chhoto chhoto sentence diye answer ta aro clear hobe.

Exemplo: I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication, depending on the situation. If possible, I like face-to-face because it helps others understand my feelings better. But sometimes, I use social media to communicate.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e grammar o sentence structure e onek problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shundor vabe organize korte, ar filler words komate. Apni 'a variety of really topic' er jaygay 'various topics' use korte paren. Erokom kichu chhoto chhoto sentence diye answer ta aro natural hobe.

Exemplo: Yes, we argue quite often, but it is normal in our friend circle. We discuss various topics, but at the end of the day, we always meet and gossip together.

× Quite often I prefer to chat with my friend because it's really convenient way to communicate with someone and as well as it's really helpful for me to develop my typing speed and which is really helpful in my future because if I work any computer related job.

✓ Quite often I prefer to chat with my friend because it's a really convenient way to communicate with someone and it is also really helpful for me to develop my typing speed, which is really helpful for my future if I work in any computer-related job.

The phrase 'really convenient way' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'really convenient way' because it is a singular countable noun. Also, 'and as well as' is redundant; 'and it is also' is clearer. 'Which is really helpful in my future' should be connected properly to the previous clause. 'If I work any computer related job' needs the preposition 'in' before 'any computer-related job' to be grammatically correct.

× Normally I chatter in daily activities with my friends, uh, like, uh, what I want to do and uh, what he want to do that type of things. Uh, I chat with my friends.

✓ Normally I chat about daily activities with my friends, like what I want to do and what he wants to do, that type of thing. I chat with my friends.

The verb 'chatter' is incorrectly used; 'chat' is the correct verb here. 'He want' should be 'he wants' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'That type of things' should be 'that type of thing' because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun.

× I prefer chat with group of people, uh, because, uh, if I chat with group of people, that time I can learn lot of things from them and I can share feelings, uh, with them, which is, uh, really helpful for me to reduce my stress.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because if I chat with a group of people, I can learn a lot of things from them and share feelings with them, which is really helpful for me to reduce my stress.

'Prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' to use the correct verb form. 'Group of people' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Lot of things' requires the article 'a' to become 'a lot of things'. 'Share feelings' is correct but the sentence is improved by removing unnecessary fillers.

× Uh, I prefer both. Uh, it's depend on the situation. If I have possible to, uh, move or face to face conversation that time I prefer it because, uh, when we, uh, communicate face to face the time opponent or opposite people, they can understand my feelings and emotion. But sometimes I prefer also, uh, by social.

✓ I prefer both. It depends on the situation. If I have the possibility to move or have a face-to-face conversation, then I prefer it because when we communicate face to face, the other person can understand my feelings and emotions. But sometimes I also prefer social media.

'It's depend' should be 'It depends' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'If I have possible to' is incorrect; it should be 'If I have the possibility to' or 'If it is possible to'. 'Face to face conversation' needs an article: 'a face-to-face conversation'. 'Opponent or opposite people' is unclear; 'the other person' is more appropriate. 'I prefer also, uh, by social' is corrected to 'I also prefer social media' for clarity and correctness.

× It's a quite often but it's normal for our friend circles because we often argue a variety of really topic but and at the end of the day we are meeting together and gossip together.

✓ It's quite often, but it's normal for our friend circle because we often argue about a variety of topics, and at the end of the day, we meet and gossip together.

'It's a quite often' should be 'It's quite often' as 'quite often' is an adverbial phrase and does not need 'a'. 'Friend circles' should be singular 'friend circle' to refer to the group. 'Argue a variety of really topic' is incorrect; it should be 'argue about a variety of topics'. 'But and' is redundant; use 'and'. 'We are meeting together and gossip together' is better as 'we meet and gossip together' for naturalness and correctness.