Chatting— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
I enjoyed chatting with friends because it offers me an opportunity to entertain myself and not to be lonely. I have a lot of friends that always tell me.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I always chat with them about any kind of things in life, especially when we have some gossips about celebrities or other people. And also I always talk to them whenever I feel straight.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel like talking with a group of umm, bunch of people. It's hard to concentrate in each people, so everybody might not get the attention.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Is depends, if umm that's someone that I know and I'm close to I prefer communicating with them face to face. But if that person I I'm not close to I would say I like chatting with them on.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Sometimes I think it's normal to have an argument sometimes, because this kind of thing will improve our relationships and also make us understand each other even more in the future and we can just.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: ควรใช้ประโยคที่เป็นปัจจุบันและตอบตรงคำถาม พร้อมทั้งเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกัน เช่น ใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือไม่สมบูรณ์
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel connected. For example, we often share stories about our daily lives, which makes me feel less lonely and more entertained.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน เช่น แทนคำว่า 'straight' ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง ควรอธิบายเนื้อหาให้ชัดเจนและใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมเหตุสมผล
Exemplo: I usually chat about various topics in life, especially celebrity gossip. Additionally, I talk to my friends when I feel stressed because sharing helps me feel better.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้คำว่า 'a bunch of people' อย่างเหมาะสม และเพิ่ม linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น
Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because when I talk to a group, it's hard to focus on each person. Therefore, some people might not get enough attention.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: ควรตอบคำถามให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำพูดไม่สมบูรณ์หรือคำอุทาน และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมเหตุสมผล
Exemplo: It depends. If the person is someone I know well, I prefer to communicate face-to-face. However, if I am not close to them, I usually chat with them via social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: ควรตอบให้สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'sometimes' ซ้ำสองครั้ง และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน
Exemplo: Sometimes, I think it's normal to argue with friends because it can improve our relationships. Moreover, arguments help us understand each other better in the future.
Gramática
× I enjoyed chatting with friends because it offers me an opportunity to entertain myself and not to be lonely.
✓ I enjoy chatting with friends because it offers me an opportunity to entertain myself and not to be lonely.
The sentence starts with 'I enjoyed' which is past tense, but the context suggests a general habit or preference, so present tense 'I enjoy' is appropriate to match the ongoing action.
× I have a lot of friends that always tell me.
✓ I have a lot of friends who always talk to me.
The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate for people; 'who' should be used. Also, 'tell me' is vague; 'talk to me' fits better in this context.
× I always chat with them about any kind of things in life, especially when we have some gossips about celebrities or other people.
✓ I always chat with them about all kinds of things in life, especially when we have some gossip about celebrities or other people.
'Any kind of things' is incorrect; 'all kinds of things' is the correct quantifier. 'Gossip' is uncountable, so 'some gossips' should be 'some gossip'.
× And also I always talk to them whenever I feel straight.
✓ And also I always talk to them whenever I feel stressed.
The word 'straight' is incorrect here; likely the intended meaning is 'stressed' or 'upset' to express emotional state.
× I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel like talking with a group of umm, bunch of people.
✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't feel like talking with a group of, umm, a bunch of people.
The sentence is missing negation to express preference properly. Also, 'a group of umm, bunch of people' is awkward; adding 'a' before 'bunch' clarifies the phrase.
× It's hard to concentrate in each people, so everybody might not get the attention.
✓ It's hard to concentrate on each person, so everybody might not get the attention.
The correct preposition is 'concentrate on' not 'concentrate in'. Also, 'each people' is incorrect; 'each person' is singular and correct here.
× Is depends, if umm that's someone that I know and I'm close to I prefer communicating with them face to face.
✓ It depends; if that's someone I know and I'm close to, I prefer communicating with them face to face.
The sentence is missing the subject 'It' before 'depends'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.
× But if that person I I'm not close to I would say I like chatting with them on.
✓ But if that person I'm not close to, I would say I like chatting with them online.
The sentence has a typo 'I I'm' and is missing the word 'online' to complete the thought. Commas improve readability.
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