Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points with better sentence structure. For example, instead of saying "I don't like chatting with my friends because I'm an introvert and I don't like talking with each other," you can say "I'm an introvert, so I usually prefer chatting only with my best friend rather than with many friends."

Exemplo: I'm an introvert, so I usually prefer chatting only with my best friend rather than with many friends.

Sugestão: Provide more specific and coherent details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "our stories" and "daily questions." Instead, explain clearly what topics you discuss and why. For example, "We usually talk about our daily routines, such as what we are eating or how our day went."

Exemplo: We usually talk about our daily routines, such as what we are eating or how our day went.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain with supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "The best day, yeah." For example, "I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am shy and feel more comfortable in small conversations."

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am shy and feel more comfortable in small conversations.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct expressions and clearer sentences. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, "I prefer communicating via social media because, as a shy person, I feel more comfortable texting rather than face-to-face."

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because, as a shy person, I feel more comfortable texting rather than face-to-face.

Sugestão: Make your answer more fluent and organized. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, "I have never argued with my friends because we are best friends who always help each other. Also, I am a patient person, so I try to understand their feelings."

Exemplo: I have never argued with my friends because we are best friends who always help each other. Also, I am a patient person, so I try to understand their feelings.

× I don't like talking with each other

✓ I don't like talking with others

The phrase 'each other' is used to indicate a reciprocal action between two people, but here the student refers generally to people, so 'others' is more appropriate.

× I usually chat about our stories and like daily routines

✓ I usually chat about our stories and daily routines

The word 'like' is incorrectly used here as a preposition. It should be removed to correctly list the topics of chat.

× We usually ask the daily questions

✓ We usually ask daily questions

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'daily questions' because it refers to questions in general, not specific ones.

× But I only tried with only one people

✓ But I only tried with only one person

The word 'people' is plural, but 'one' requires a singular noun, so 'person' should be used.

× And that's I'm the shy person

✓ And that's because I'm a shy person

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. Adding 'because' and correcting the article improves clarity and grammar.

× I prefer it by testing a message like a social media

✓ I prefer texting a message through social media

The phrase 'by testing a message like a social media' is incorrect. 'Texting' is the correct verb, and 'through social media' is the proper prepositional phrase.

× I don't like showing my face to many people's

✓ I don't like showing my face to many people

The apostrophe in 'people's' incorrectly indicates possession. The plural noun 'people' should be used without an apostrophe.

× I like talking with and by the social media

✓ I like talking through social media

The phrase 'talking with and by the social media' is incorrect. 'Through social media' is the correct prepositional phrase to express communication via social media.

× I never I have never argued with my friends

✓ I have never argued with my friends

The phrase 'I never I have never' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the first 'I never' corrects the sentence.

× We are bestie and we always help each other and and I also and the patient person

✓ We are besties and we always help each other, and I am also a patient person

'Bestie' should be plural 'besties' to match 'we'. The phrase 'and and I also and the patient person' is ungrammatical and should be corrected to 'and I am also a patient person'.

× So I always understand my each other feelings

✓ So I always understand each other's feelings

The phrase 'my each other feelings' is incorrect. 'Each other's feelings' is the correct possessive form to indicate mutual feelings.