ChattingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like chatting with friends?

Candidato

Yes, I really like to chat with my friends. We chat a lot of things such as how the school is and how the restaurant is. We talked a lot and I really like to do this.

Examinador

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Candidato

As I just mentioned before, we talked almost everything in life, especially daily life, such as, uh, how my homework is so hard and, uh, what's your favorite, uh, actors and actress? That's uh, really fun thing.

Examinador

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Candidato

No, I only like to chat with one friend instead of a group of people. I'm an introvert people and I think it's embarrassed to talk with a group of people that would me make me very upset and I will not do that.

Examinador

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Candidato

Actually, I really like to have a conversation with somebody online 'cause I think it's very convenient and we have a lot of free time to choose whether to continue or stop.

Examinador

Do you argue with friends?

Candidato

Definitely. I think almost every friend I have. We often argue a lot. That's not a big thing, but I think this can make our relationship closer despite something bad.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达,内容应更自然流畅。可以用更具体的例子丰富回答,避免简单罗列。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. We often talk about our school life and new restaurants we've tried recently. These conversations help us stay connected and share our experiences.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中有较多语气词,影响流畅度。应避免重复提及之前内容,且细节描述应更具体。

Exemplo: Usually, we chat about daily life topics like the challenges of my homework and our favorite actors and actresses. These topics make our conversations enjoyable and interesting.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 语法错误较多,表达不够自然。应使用正确的句型表达个人偏好,并给出具体原因。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am an introvert. Talking in a group makes me feel uncomfortable and anxious, so I usually avoid it.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答较自然,但可以增加更多细节和连接词,使表达更连贯丰富。

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer communicating online because it is very convenient. Moreover, it allows me to decide when to continue or pause the conversation, which suits my free time.

Do you argue with friends?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答内容简单,语法和表达不够准确。应更清晰地表达观点,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Definitely, I sometimes argue with my friends. However, I believe these arguments are not serious and can actually strengthen our relationships by helping us understand each other better.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× We chat a lot of things such as how the school is and how the restaurant is.

We chat about a lot of things such as how the school is and how the restaurant is.

这里缺少介词“about”,导致表达不完整。'chat'后面通常接介词'about'来引出聊天的内容。

Past tense issue

× We talked a lot and I really like to do this.

We talked a lot and I really liked to do this.

前半句用的是过去时'talked',后半句应保持时态一致,使用过去时'liked'。

Past tense issue

× As I just mentioned before, we talked almost everything in life, especially daily life, such as, uh, how my homework is so hard and, uh, what's your favorite, uh, actors and actress?

As I just mentioned before, we talked about almost everything in life, especially daily life, such as, uh, how my homework is so hard and, uh, who your favorite actors and actresses are.

1. 'talked almost everything'缺少介词'about'。2. 'actors and actress'应为复数形式'actors and actresses'。3. 问句结构不正确,应为'who your favorite actors and actresses are'。

Singular and plural issue

× what's your favorite, uh, actors and actress?

who your favorite actors and actresses are?

'actors and actress'中'actors'是复数,'actress'是单数,需统一为复数形式'actors and actresses'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× That's uh, really fun thing.

That's, uh, a really fun thing.

缺少冠词'a','fun'是形容词,修饰名词'thing'时前面需要冠词。

Singular and plural issue

× No, I only like to chat with one friend instead of a group of people. I'm an introvert people and I think it's embarrassed to talk with a group of people that would me make me very upset and I will not do that.

No, I only like to chat with one friend instead of a group of people. I'm an introverted person and I think it's embarrassing to talk with a group of people; that would make me very upset and I will not do that.

1. 'introvert people'应为单数形式'introverted person'。2. 'it's embarrassed'应为形容词形式'embarrassing'。3. 句子结构混乱,调整为更通顺的表达。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm an introvert people and I think it's embarrassed to talk with a group of people that would me make me very upset and I will not do that.

I'm an introverted person and I think it's embarrassing to talk to a group of people; that would make me very upset and I will not do that.

'talk with'和'talk to'都可用,但这里用'talk to'更自然。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× that would me make me very upset

that would make me very upset

多余的'me'导致语法错误,应删除。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Actually, I really like to have a conversation with somebody online 'cause I think it's very convenient and we have a lot of free time to choose whether to continue or stop.

Actually, I really like to have a conversation with somebody online because I think it's very convenient and we have a lot of free time to choose whether to continue or stop.

口语缩写'cause'在正式表达中应改为'because'。

Sentence structure errors

× Definitely. I think almost every friend I have. We often argue a lot.

Definitely. I think I argue with almost every friend I have. We often argue a lot.

'I think almost every friend I have'缺少谓语,句子不完整,需补充谓语使句子完整。

Vocabulário

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
UpsetDistress; Knock over; Disrupt; Defeat
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