Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, use more natural phrasing such as 'close ones' instead of 'closed ones'. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail with a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends as well as family because it helps us stay connected. Moreover, it's the easiest way to share messages quickly.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and filler words to make your answer clearer. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'usually' to organize your ideas. Also, try to be more specific about the topics you discuss.

Exemplo: I usually chat about everyday topics. For example, we often make plans to go out or talk about what we are doing at the moment.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas. Also, be more concise and natural in your explanation.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If I need to discuss something important, I prefer chatting in a group. However, if I have a secret, I would talk privately with one friend.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and complete your answer fully. Use linking words like 'for instance' and 'because' to explain your preference clearly. Also, mention the benefits of both methods to show balanced thinking.

Exemplo: Both face-to-face and social media communication have their benefits. For instance, I prefer face-to-face talks with people nearby because I can read their body language, which helps understanding.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'funny ambiance'. Use clearer vocabulary and explain your ideas with examples. Also, organize your answer logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. These arguments can be positive, like playful teasing, or negative. For example, when we joke around, we might have small disagreements, but they are usually harmless.

× Yes, of course I do like chatting with friends, not only with the friends but also I do with my, uh, family and other closed ones.

✓ Yes, of course I do like chatting with friends, not only with friends but also with my, uh, family and other close ones.

The pronoun 'the friends' is incorrect here because it implies specific friends already mentioned, which is not the case. Also, 'closed ones' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'close ones' to refer to people emotionally near to you. Additionally, 'I do with my family' is awkward; it should be 'with my family' to parallel the structure.

× Or if we are doing something or we, we are about to, uh, go somewhere or then we chat with our friends to making, uh, to make plans.

✓ Or if we are doing something or we are about to, uh, go somewhere, then we chat with our friends to make plans.

The phrase 'to making' is incorrect because after 'to' (a preposition or infinitive marker), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to make plans' is correct.

× So these are the things I, we usually talk.

✓ So these are the things we usually talk about.

The sentence incorrectly mixes 'I' and 'we' and omits the preposition 'about' which is necessary after 'talk' when specifying topics. The correct pronoun is 'we' to match the plural subject, and 'talk about' is the correct phrase.

× If I have something secret to tell to only with the one friend, then it will be the private talk.

✓ If I have something secret to tell only to one friend, then it will be a private talk.

The phrase 'to tell to only with the one friend' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'tell only to one friend'. Also, 'the private talk' should be 'a private talk' because it is not a specific known talk.

× But so that's why it does depends on the situation, what I'm I want to do and what I'm gonna do.

✓ So that's why it does depend on the situation, what I want to do and what I'm going to do.

The phrase 'it does depends' is incorrect; 'does' should be followed by the base verb 'depend'. Also, 'what I'm I want to do' is incorrect; it should be 'what I want to do'. 'Gonna' is informal but acceptable in speech; however, 'going to' is more standard.

× Both ways has their own benefits.

✓ Both ways have their own benefits.

The subject 'Both ways' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× If a person is living closer to me then definitely I would prefer to talk with them face to face because when we are talking we can get to know the body language.

✓ If a person is living close to me, then definitely I would prefer to talk to them face to face because when we are talking we can get to know their body language.

The adjective 'closer' is comparative and requires a comparison object; 'close' is correct here. Also, 'talk with' is acceptable but 'talk to' is more common when referring to communication. 'The body language' should be 'their body language' to specify whose body language is meant.

× Arguments can be in both ways, positive or negative.

✓ Arguments can be in both ways: positive or negative.

A colon is needed after 'both ways' to introduce the examples. Also, 'in both ways' is acceptable but 'in both positive and negative ways' would be clearer. However, the main issue is punctuation.