Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear towards the end. Try to keep your response concise and complete your thoughts clearly within 4-5 sentences. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it strengthens our bond and helps me stay positive. Talking to them lifts my mood and keeps me away from negative thoughts.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use correct question forms and avoid hesitations.

Exemplo: We usually chat about various topics such as our personal lives, career plans, relationships, and studies. For example, I often discuss my future job goals with my friends.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Also, try to make your sentences more natural and fluent.

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy chatting both one-on-one and in groups. In groups, many different ideas come up, which makes the conversation more interesting and longer.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. Also, I can see the other person's facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better.

Sugestão: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain the nature of your arguments.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but these are friendly debates. We discuss our differences calmly, which helps us understand each other better without harming our relationship.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends as it is the form of communication which helps to enhance the bond between the people and it helps to keep your mind away from negativity and if something is.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends as it is a form of communication that helps enhance the bond between people and keeps your mind away from negativity.

The original sentence is too long and lacks proper structure, making it confusing. 'The form' should be 'a form' because it is one of many forms. 'Which' is better replaced by 'that' for defining clauses. 'Between the people' should be 'between people' for generalization. The phrase 'and if something is' is incomplete and unclear, so it is removed for clarity.

× Will we normally talk about every aspect of life like about personal things, professional things? What we will he do in his career, about relationships, about study?

✓ We normally talk about every aspect of life, like personal things, professional things, what he will do in his career, relationships, and studies.

The use of 'Will we' is incorrect here as the question is about usual habits, so simple present tense is appropriate. The phrase 'What we will he do' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'what he will do'. Also, 'about study' should be 'studies' to refer to the subject generally.

× Well, there is no personal preference. I like to chat with a single person also and in a group also. in Group multiple thoughts and perspectives came into the picture, so it gives a long chatting conversation time.

✓ Well, there is no personal preference. I like to chat with a single person as well as in a group. In a group, multiple thoughts and perspectives come into the picture, so it leads to longer conversations.

'In Group' should be 'In a group' with an article. 'Came' is past tense but the context is general, so present tense 'come' is correct. 'Gives a long chatting conversation time' is awkward; 'leads to longer conversations' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Well I personally prefer face to face communication as it leads to more personal feel and I can see your. The person in front of me can also see the facial expression.

✓ Well, I personally prefer face-to-face communication as it leads to a more personal feel, and I can see you. The person in front of me can also see my facial expressions.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'More personal feel' needs an article 'a'. 'I can see your.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I can see you.' Also, 'the facial expression' should be 'my facial expressions' to specify whose expressions are seen.

× Yes, I do argue with the friends, but it is a a very friendly argument. It's not like that we just fight with each other and it such arguments rather than disrupting the relationship.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends, but it is a very friendly argument. It's not like we just fight with each other; such arguments happen rather than disrupting the relationship.

'The friends' should be 'friends' as it refers to friends in general. The repeated 'a a' is a typo. 'It's not like that we just fight' is awkward; 'It's not like we just fight' is better. 'And it such arguments' is incorrect; 'such arguments happen' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.