Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“checked in”应为“check in”，“scrolling or screwing”应为“scrolling or screwing”是错误表达，应改为“scrolling or browsing”。建议注意时态一致性和正确表达动作。

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. When I have free time after class, I usually scroll through my phone and send messages to them on WeChat.

Sugestão: 回答中多次使用“check with”表达不准确，应使用“chat with”或“talk with”。内容较为简单，建议增加具体细节和连贯的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about academic English, especially IELTS. We discuss topics, writing skills, and share useful tips, which I find very interesting.

Sugestão: 回答中存在多处表达错误，如“check with groups instead of France”应为“chat with groups instead of friends”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确词汇，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a group of friends rather than just one person because group chats are more interesting and we can discuss various topics together.

Sugestão: 表达较为清晰，但“sense of communications”不够地道，建议使用“better communication”或“more personal connection”。同时避免重复表达“you will feel”。

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better interaction and you can truly feel the other person's emotions.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达混乱，如“put a topic on the reach a message type”不明确。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连贯的连接词。

Exemplo: I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions on a topic, especially during online discussions. But usually, we just talk and try to understand each other.

× Absolutely, I always checked in with my friends when I'm free.

✓ Absolutely, I always check in with my friends when I'm free.

句子中使用了过去时态"checked"，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"check"。

× When I after class I will scrolling or screwing my phone and send the WeChat message to my friends.

✓ After class, I will scroll or swipe my phone and send WeChat messages to my friends.

动词"scrolling"和"screwing"用法错误，应使用动词原形"scroll"和"swipe"，且"screwing"应为"swiping"，表示滑动手机屏幕。

× Oh, I always check with my friends to talk about the academic English, like IELTS English.

✓ Oh, I always chat with my friends to talk about academic English, like IELTS English.

"check with"用法不当，应使用"chat with"表示聊天。

× Yeah, you know, we like to discuss the topic, the writing skills or something like that.

✓ Yeah, you know, we like to discuss topics, writing skills, or something like that.

"the topic"应为复数形式"topics"，因为后文提到多种内容。

× It's quite interesting to check with my friends.

✓ It's quite interesting to chat with my friends.

"check with"用法错误，应为"chat with"表示聊天。

× In my opinion, I would like to check with groups instead of France, like single ones.

✓ In my opinion, I would like to chat with groups instead of friends, like single ones.

"check with"用法错误，应为"chat with"；"France"应为"friends"。

× In my opinion, I would like to check with groups instead of France, like single ones.

✓ In my opinion, I would like to chat with groups instead of friends, like single ones.

"France"拼写错误，应为复数形式"friends"。

× Yeah, you know, the group chat is very interesting.

✓ Yeah, you know, group chats are very interesting.

"group chat"应为复数形式"group chats"，与后文复数动词保持一致。

× You can discuss among among friends, you can discuss anyone topic you like to talk.

✓ You can discuss among friends, you can discuss any topic you like to talk about.

"anyone topic"错误，应为"any topic"；"among among"重复，应去掉一个。

× In my perspective, I prefer face to face talking instead of talking online.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer face-to-face talking instead of talking online.

固定搭配应为"from my perspective"，"face-to-face"需用连字符。

× You know, face to face has more sense of communications.

✓ You know, face-to-face communication has more sense.

"face to face"应为形容词短语"face-to-face"修饰名词；"communications"应为不可数名词"communication"。

× And yeah, you will feel, you will feel the emotion of this guy.

✓ And yeah, you will feel the emotions of this person.

"this guy"口语化且不正式，改为"this person"更合适；"emotion"应为复数"emotions"。

× Yeah. You know something? We, I I put a topic on the reach a message type and my friend disagree.

✓ Yeah. You know something? I put a topic in a group chat and my friend disagreed.

句子结构混乱，"reach a message type"无意义，改为"put a topic in a group chat"更通顺；"disagree"应为过去时"disagreed"。

× And in this situation, I will, yeah, you know, talk with you, discuss with you, argue with you.

✓ And in this situation, I will, yeah, you know, talk with you, discuss with you, and argue with you.

列举动作时应使用连词"and"连接。