Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'because' and 'support', you can say 'I like chatting with friends because they provide emotional and moral support when I feel down, which helps me find solutions to my problems.'

Exemplo: Yes, I like chatting with friends because they provide emotional and moral support when I feel down. Moreover, I can listen to their advice, which helps me find ways to solve my problems effectively.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'MMM'. Use linking words such as 'besides' and 'so' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more specific about the personal problems you discuss to enrich your content.

Exemplo: I usually chat with my friends about our favorite idols, sharing new songs and updates. Besides that, we also discuss personal problems to support each other, which helps us understand each other better and stay closer.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'but' correctly. Also, try to finish your sentences to make your answer effective and natural.

Exemplo: Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group, but other times I prefer talking to just one friend. For example, when discussing family problems, I prefer one-on-one conversations. However, for school topics, group chats are more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better understand emotions compared to social media, which only uses words or emojis.'

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can better understand people's emotions. In contrast, social media only allows typing words or sending emojis, which makes it hard to know their true feelings.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar and complete your sentences. For example, say 'Yes, I have argued with a friend because she often ignored my messages, which made me feel sad.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have argued with a friend because she often ignored my messages and focused too much on TikTok. This made me feel sad and upset.

× Yes, I like to be with friends because when my emotion is down, they can give me emotional support and moral support.

✓ Yes, I like to be with friends because when my emotions are down, they can give me emotional support and moral support.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to feelings in general, which are countable in this context. Using plural form is correct when talking about feelings collectively.

× So I can feel happy because something because someone is support me and I also can hear their advice and I can find a method to solve the solve the problem in my life.

✓ So I can feel happy because someone supports me and I can also hear their advice and find a method to solve the problem in my life.

The phrase 'someone is support me' is incorrect; it should be 'someone supports me' to match subject-verb agreement. Also, 'something because' is redundant and removed for clarity. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and fluency.

× I usually chat with my friend about our favorite idol because we like to share the new song and update about them.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our favorite idols because we like to share new songs and updates about them.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' as it refers to multiple people. 'Idol' should be plural 'idols' to match 'them'. 'The new song' and 'update' should be plural 'new songs' and 'updates' to indicate multiple items shared.

× Beside that we we also talk about the personal problem so that we can support each other and we can learn about each other better so it help us umm stay closer and MMM.

✓ Besides that, we also talk about personal problems so that we can support each other and learn about each other better, which helps us stay closer.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' as it is used to mean 'in addition to'. 'The personal problem' should be 'personal problems' to generalize. 'It help us' should be 'which helps us' for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× I usually chat with my friend about our favorite idol because we like to share the new song and update about them.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our favorite idols because we like to share new songs and updates about them.

The pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'idols' which is plural. The correction ensures consistency in number between nouns and pronouns.

× Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group, but sometimes I prefer to chat with only one friend. It depends on what we talk.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group, but sometimes I prefer to chat with only one friend. It depends on what we talk about.

The phrase 'depends on what we talk' is incomplete; it should be 'depends on what we talk about' to correctly use the preposition with the verb 'talk'.

× So for example, when we talk about our my family problem, I prefer to chat with my only friend.

✓ So for example, when we talk about my family problems, I prefer to chat with only one friend.

'Our my family problem' is incorrect; it should be 'my family problems'. Also, 'my only friend' is better expressed as 'only one friend' for clarity.

× But when I but, uh, but we want to chat about something about school, I prefer.

✓ But when we want to chat about something related to school, I prefer to chat with a group.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to complete the thought and clarify preference when chatting about school topics.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when we communicate face to face, I can learn their. I can see her emotion, emotion more better, more better than social media because social media only type the word or just send the emoji.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when we communicate face to face, I can understand their emotions better than through social media, which only involves typing words or sending emojis.

'Learn their' is incorrect; it should be 'understand their emotions'. 'More better' is redundant; 'better' alone is correct. 'Type the word' should be 'typing words'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I cannot know their own emotion.

✓ I cannot know their true emotions.

'Their own emotion' is awkward; 'their true emotions' is clearer and more natural in English.

× Yes I have experience I give with friends because she always ignore me and she immerses herself in TikTok so she ignore my message and like when she reply me she skip my message so I feel sad so we so we.

✓ Yes, I have experience with friends because she always ignores me and immerses herself in TikTok, so she ignores my messages. When she replies to me, she skips my messages, so I feel sad.

The verbs 'ignore' and 'reply' need to be in third person singular present tense 'ignores' and 'replies' to agree with 'she'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.