Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In your answer, try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons why you go to the library, using words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. It helps me learn new lessons that I don't understand well. Also, the library is a quiet place where I can focus on studying.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your actions. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more specific about what you do in the library.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read books that help me understand lessons I find difficult. I do this because I need to research and explore more information to improve my knowledge.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using simple sentences and correct expressions. Avoid repeating words and use linking words like 'because' to explain why you liked going to the library.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed listening to storytelling sessions. It was really fun and helped me learn new things.

Sugestão: Try to answer directly and confidently. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect your ideas. Avoid filler words and be more specific in your opinion.

Exemplo: I'm not sure because I am not Chinese, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a good place to read books and find information for their studies.

× I go to the library to find the information and learn more from the lessons that I want to know and I explore more the grammar, vocabulary and want to know about umm the lesson that I don't know to because as we know that is very important in library.

✓ I go to the library to find information and learn more about the lessons that I want to know, and I explore more grammar and vocabulary. I also want to learn about the lessons that I don't know because, as we know, it is very important in the library.

The phrase 'find the information' should be 'find information' because 'information' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. 'Learn more from the lessons' should be 'learn more about the lessons' because 'learn about' is the correct preposition to indicate the subject of learning. 'Explore more the grammar, vocabulary' is incorrect; it should be 'explore more grammar and vocabulary' without 'the' and with 'and' to connect the nouns. 'Want to know about umm the lesson that I don't know to' is awkward; it should be 'want to learn about the lessons that I don't know' with correct prepositions and plural form. Also, 'in library' should be 'in the library' because 'library' is a specific place and needs the definite article.

× I usually read a book and I find a book, uh, which just make me feel, uh, that I unclear with the lesson and I need more some researching that I have to find, umm, the information that I have to explore.

✓ I usually read a book and find a book that makes me feel unclear about the lesson, and I need to do more research to find the information that I have to explore.

The phrase 'make me feel that I unclear with the lesson' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel unclear about the lesson' because 'unclear' is an adjective that requires 'about' to indicate the subject. 'Need more some researching' is incorrect; it should be 'need to do more research' because 'research' is uncountable and 'researching' is not used as a noun here. 'I have to find, umm, the information' is acceptable but can be smoother as 'to find the information'.

× I'd like to go to the library and I, I went there to spend my time with umm, the storytelling and also the territory of the story like that.

✓ I liked to go to the library and I went there to spend my time with storytelling and also the territory of the story like that.

The phrase 'I'd like to go' is present tense or conditional, but since the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a kid'), it should be 'I liked to go' to match the past tense. 'Spend my time with umm, the storytelling' is acceptable but 'the storytelling' can be just 'storytelling' without 'the' because it is a general activity. 'Territory of the story like that' is unclear but kept as is since it may be a vocabulary issue beyond grammar.

× And it's really fun for me when I first kid.

✓ And it was really fun for me when I was a kid.

'When I first kid' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a kid' to indicate the past time and correct singular noun usage. Also, 'it's really fun' should be 'it was really fun' to match the past tense context.

× I can say that the library is a place with many books to find the information and for the student to read the book.

✓ I can say that the library is a place with many books to find information and for students to read books.

'The student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to people in general. 'The book' should be plural 'books' to match 'many books' and generalize the statement. 'Find the information' should be 'find information' because 'information' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here.