Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding contradictions and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then provide specific reasons using linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain that you rarely go to the library because you can access resources online and the library is far from your home.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because I can access most resources online from home. Also, the library is quite far from where I live, so it's not very convenient for me to visit.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by using more linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and by avoiding minor grammar mistakes. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your phrasing.

Exemplo: Although I don't visit the library often, when I do, I usually look for books in my favorite genre, comedy. However, the selection is limited, so it can take some time. Once I find a good book, I enjoy reading it quietly while having a cup of coffee.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains contradictions. Make sure to provide a clear and coherent response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and contradictory statements. For example, clearly state that you used to enjoy going to the library as a child and reading books was your favorite hobby.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I often visited the local library near my home. Reading books was my favorite hobby, and I enjoyed spending time there exploring different stories.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and off-topic. Try to answer the question directly with a clear opinion supported by specific reasons or examples. Avoid irrelevant or unclear statements. For instance, you can say that many Chinese kids go to the library because of cultural emphasis on education and reading.

Exemplo: I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because education and reading are highly valued in Chinese culture. For example, my Chinese friend frequently visits the library to study and borrow books.

× I really go to the library since everything is able to be accessed at home.

✓ I rarely go to the library since everything is accessible at home.

The modal verb 'really' is incorrectly used here to express frequency. The correct modal adverb to express infrequency is 'rarely'. Also, 'able to be accessed' is wordy; 'accessible' is more natural.

× I view online resources and articles through my laptop and I do not have enough time to go visit one as well as it's not located near my home either, so I don't.

✓ I view online resources and articles through my laptop, and I do not have enough time to visit one, as it is not located near my home either, so I don't.

The phrase 'go visit one' is awkward; 'visit one' is sufficient. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions and punctuation for clarity.

× I don't frequently visit a library, but when I do, I go search for a book.

✓ I don't frequently visit libraries, but when I do, I go to search for a book.

The noun 'library' should be plural 'libraries' when speaking generally. Also, 'go search' should be 'go to search' for correct verb usage.

× This process is time consuming since the library I go to doesn't have a wide selection of my favorite genre.

✓ This process is time-consuming since the library I go to doesn't have a wide selection of my favorite genres.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'genre' should be plural 'genres' to match 'selection'.

× I love comedy, It's fun to read, unlike other genres.

✓ I love comedy; it's fun to read, unlike other genres.

The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. Also, 'It's' should be lowercase after a semicolon.

× Once I have found a suitable book, I like to spend some time reading it quietly with a cup of coffee in the library.

✓ Once I have found a suitable book, I like to spend some time reading it quietly with a cup of coffee in the library.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× Yes, I used to visit a nearby local library when I was nine years old.

✓ Yes, I used to visit a nearby local library when I was nine years old.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× I fantasised reading books and actually it was my favorite hobby.

✓ I fantasized about reading books, and it was actually my favorite hobby.

The verb 'fantasised' should be followed by 'about' to be correct. Also, the sentence needs a comma before 'and' and better word order for clarity.

× I loved reading books and.

✓ I loved reading books.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' It should be completed or the conjunction removed.

× I never read books.

✓ I never read books.

This sentence is grammatically correct but contradicts the previous sentence. No correction needed for grammar.

× I personally think Chinese kids do often go to the library since I had a Chinese friend and whenever I asked her where does she wants to go she always mentioned the library but I'm an Asian kid so I don't go to the library so man I don't know why it's talking about it. Hello.

✓ I personally think Chinese kids often go to the library because I had a Chinese friend, and whenever I asked her where she wanted to go, she always mentioned the library. But I'm an Asian kid, so I don't go to the library, and I don't know why we're talking about it.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb tense errors. 'Does she wants' should be 'she wanted' for correct indirect question. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'So man' is informal and unclear, replaced with proper conjunctions.