Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'really very', use 'quite' or 'very'.

Exemplo: No, I rarely go to the library nowadays because I have a very hectic work schedule, so I don't have much free time to visit.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear and coherent answer by structuring your response with linking words and avoiding unclear phrases. Be specific about your activities and avoid vague statements like 'I like to read around that what's happening around my neighbor.'

Exemplo: When I visit the library, I usually read books about history and drama. Additionally, I enjoy looking at the posters on the notice board to learn about local events.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'Yeah'.

Exemplo: I really enjoyed going to the library as a child because I had a habit of reading daily. Therefore, I often asked my parents to take me there so I could enjoy books with colourful pictures and cartoons.

Sugestão: Try to give a more confident and structured answer. Avoid vague phrases like 'maybe Chinese could' and informal language such as 'yeah'. Use linking words to clarify your reasoning.

Exemplo: I'm not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I have heard that Chinese students study extensively and attend school until late in the evening. Therefore, they might not have much time to visit the library often.

× No, it's very rare that I go to library nowadays as I'm having a really very hectic schedule.

✓ No, it's very rare that I go to the library nowadays as I'm having a really very hectic schedule.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I'm usually really very busy at my work so I don't get much time to visit the library.

✓ I'm usually really very busy at work so I don't get much time to visit the library.

The phrase 'at work' is an idiomatic expression and does not require the possessive pronoun 'my'. Using 'my work' here is incorrect because it refers to the job in general, not a specific place.

× So when I get a chance to go to library, I try reading as many books as possible, especially the books related to the history and drama.

✓ So when I get a chance to go to the library, I try reading as many books as possible, especially the books related to history and drama.

Again, 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'history' and 'drama' are general subjects and do not need the definite article 'the' before them.

× So this is the things that I usually do or there are many pictures or posters that are there on the notice board.

✓ So these are the things that I usually do, and there are many pictures or posters on the notice board.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'things'; it should be 'these'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× I like to read around that what's happening around my neighbor.

✓ I like to read about what's happening around my neighbourhood.

The preposition 'around' is incorrectly used with 'read'. The correct preposition is 'about' when referring to the content of reading. Also, 'neighbor' should be 'neighbourhood' to refer to the area around one's home.

× I really liked going to library when I was a child because I had a habit of reading a book daily.

✓ I really liked going to the library when I was a child because I had a habit of reading a book daily.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× So I always insisted my parents to take me to the library so I can enjoy the books with the different pictures, cartoons on those.

✓ So I always insisted that my parents take me to the library so I could enjoy the books with different pictures and cartoons in them.

The verb 'insist' is followed by 'that' plus a subjunctive or modal verb, not an infinitive. Also, 'on those' is incorrect; 'in them' is appropriate to refer to pictures and cartoons inside the books.

× So I always insisted my parents to take me to the library so I can enjoy the books with the different pictures, cartoons on those.

✓ So I always insisted that my parents take me to the library so I could enjoy the books with different pictures and cartoons in them.

The modal verb 'can' should be in the past form 'could' to match the past tense context. Also, 'insisted' requires a 'that' clause with subjunctive mood, not an infinitive.

× That's something hard to answer because I'm not aware about the Chinese culture, but to the extent that I've heard that Chinese people study a lot and they have their schools till the evening and even at the night.

✓ That's something hard to answer because I'm not aware of Chinese culture, but to the extent that I've heard, Chinese people study a lot and have school until the evening and even at night.

The correct preposition with 'aware' is 'of', not 'about'. Also, 'their schools' is better as 'school' in general. 'At the night' should be 'at night' without the article.

× So I think, yeah, maybe Chinese could.

✓ So I think, yeah, maybe Chinese do.

The modal verb 'could' implies possibility or ability, but here the speaker is stating a habitual action, so the simple present 'do' is appropriate.