Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. For example, focus on the peaceful environment and affordability as your main points.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate. Also, the books are affordable and easy to access, which helps me a lot.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using proper linking words and correcting grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use vocabulary relevant to the context.

Exemplo: I usually read books in the library because it is a good place to find information and learn new things. Reading there helps me generate ideas and improve my knowledge.

Sugestão: Focus on making your answer complete and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide reasons with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I did not often go to the library because I was more interested in playing games than reading books.

Sugestão: Try to answer the question more directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. In my opinion, children have different interests; some like reading, while others prefer playing games.

× Yes, I usually go to the library because libraries only that place that can I can easily concentrate my mind and there is a full of peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library because it is the only place where I can easily concentrate my mind and there is a peaceful environment.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'libraries only that place' which is ungrammatical. The definite article 'the' should be used with 'only place' to specify a unique location. Also, 'there is a full of peaceful environment' is incorrect; 'a peaceful environment' is the correct phrase without 'full of'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper article and phrase structure.

× And another reason is that liability was so is so cheap and I can easily get that.

✓ Another reason is that the library is very cheap and I can easily access it.

The word 'liability' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'library'. Also, 'was so is so cheap' is incorrect; it should be 'is very cheap' to match present tense. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. The phrase 'get that' is vague; 'access it' is clearer.

× Of course, I usually read in the library because libraries are the place where we can easily get idea and able to read myself and generate idea and get knowledge from their book.

✓ Of course, I usually read in the library because libraries are places where we can easily get ideas, read by ourselves, generate ideas, and get knowledge from their books.

'Libraries are the place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'libraries'. 'Get idea' and 'generate idea' should be plural 'ideas'. 'Able to read myself' is incorrect; it should be 'read by ourselves' or 'read on my own'. 'Their book' should be 'their books' to match plural 'libraries'. These corrections fix pluralization and pronoun usage.

× Actually, when I was sad, I was not going to the library because when I was a child there I I had more interested in playing games rather than reading books and library because.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I did not go to the library because I was more interested in playing games rather than reading books or going to the library.

The phrase 'when I was sad' is likely a mistake for 'when I was a child'. 'I was not going' should be past simple 'I did not go' to describe habitual past action. 'I had more interested' is incorrect; it should be 'I was more interested'. The sentence is incomplete and redundant; the correction completes the thought clearly.

× Actually I don't know the Chinese people often go to the library or not, because in my point of view children's are capable in their own skills.

✓ Actually, I don't know whether Chinese people often go to the library or not, because in my point of view, children are capable in their own skills.

'The Chinese people' is better as 'Chinese people' without 'the' for generalization. 'Children's' is possessive but should be plural 'children'. The phrase 'whether... or not' is the correct form to express uncertainty. These corrections fix pronoun and article usage.

× For example, if some peoples are like to read but whereas other kids like to play games.

✓ For example, some people like to read, whereas other kids like to play games.

'If some peoples are like to read but whereas' is incorrect. 'If' is unnecessary here. 'Peoples' should be 'people' as the plural of person. The conjunction 'whereas' is sufficient to contrast two ideas; 'but' is redundant. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.