LibraryPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you often go to the library?

Candidato

How often I go to library? Most of the time I visit library one or two times in a week to read the books that I don't have at at my home and to learn in the quiet conditions without any distractions.

Examinador

What do you usually do in the library?

Candidato

Most of the time I'm trying to study in the library in a quiet condition because it's hard to focus on the lessons at home and library is a quiet place where no entertainment and it's more comfortable.

Examinador

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Candidato

During my childhood I haven't visited any library because for me it was very boring experience and I didn't even wanted to try it. But nowadays I visit libraries to study in a quiet condition but during the childhood no one wants to study so I didn't visit.

Examinador

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Candidato

I do not have such exact information about Chinese gates, but I think that nationality does not depend on the visits of library and each nation visits almost the same amount and facing library is very good for each nation.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlar var. Daha təbii və səlis ifadə üçün cümlələrinizi sadə və düzgün qurun. Məsələn, 'I usually visit the library once or twice a week to read books I don't have at home and to study in a quiet environment without distractions.'

Exemplo: I usually visit the library once or twice a week to read books I don't have at home and to study in a quiet environment without distractions.

What do you usually do in the library?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və əlaqələndirici sözlərin çatışmazlığı var. Cavabınızı daha axıcı etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və cümlələri düzgün qurun. Məsələn, 'I usually study in the library because it's quiet and free from distractions, which helps me focus better than at home.'

Exemplo: I usually study in the library because it's quiet and free from distractions, which helps me focus better than at home.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: Cavabınızda zaman formaları və qrammatika səhvləri var. Daha aydın və təbii ifadə üçün cümlələrinizi sadə keçmiş zamanda qurun və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I didn't visit libraries as a child because I found it boring and didn't want to try. However, now I go to study in a quiet environment.'

Exemplo: I didn't visit libraries as a child because I found it boring and didn't want to try. However, now I go to study in a quiet environment.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: Cavabınızda söz seçimi və qrammatika səhvləri var. Daha aydın və təbii cavab üçün fikrinizi sadə və düzgün ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I don't have exact information about Chinese children, but I believe that library visits depend more on personal interest than nationality. Visiting libraries is beneficial for everyone.'

Exemplo: I don't have exact information about Chinese children, but I believe that library visits depend more on personal interest than nationality. Visiting libraries is beneficial for everyone.

Gramática

Sentence structure errors

× How often I go to library?

How often do I go to the library?

The original sentence is a question but lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, questions in the present simple tense require 'do' or 'does' as an auxiliary verb, and 'library' as a singular countable noun needs the article 'the'.

Article errors

× Most of the time I visit library one or two times in a week to read the books that I don't have at at my home and to learn in the quiet conditions without any distractions.

Most of the time I visit the library one or two times a week to read books that I don't have at my home and to learn in quiet conditions without any distractions.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the'. 'Books' is plural and does not need 'the' unless referring to specific books. 'At at' is a typo and should be 'at'. 'In the quiet conditions' is better as 'in quiet conditions' because 'conditions' is plural and general here.

Article errors

× Most of the time I'm trying to study in the library in a quiet condition because it's hard to focus on the lessons at home and library is a quiet place where no entertainment and it's more comfortable.

Most of the time I'm trying to study in the library in quiet conditions because it's hard to focus on the lessons at home and the library is a quiet place with no entertainment and it's more comfortable.

'In a quiet condition' should be plural 'in quiet conditions' to express general environment. 'Library' as a singular countable noun requires 'the' before it. 'Where no entertainment' is incomplete; it should be 'with no entertainment' to indicate absence of distractions.

Past tense issue

× During my childhood I haven't visited any library because for me it was very boring experience and I didn't even wanted to try it.

During my childhood I didn't visit any library because for me it was a very boring experience and I didn't even want to try it.

The present perfect 'haven't visited' is incorrect for a finished past time 'during my childhood'; simple past 'didn't visit' is correct. 'Wanted' should be base form 'want' after 'didn't' because 'did' already marks past tense.

Article errors

× But nowadays I visit libraries to study in a quiet condition but during the childhood no one wants to study so I didn't visit.

But nowadays I visit libraries to study in quiet conditions, but during childhood no one wanted to study so I didn't visit.

'In a quiet condition' should be plural 'in quiet conditions' for general meaning. 'During the childhood' is incorrect; 'during childhood' is the correct expression. 'No one wants' should be past tense 'no one wanted' to match past time frame.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I do not have such exact information about Chinese gates, but I think that nationality does not depend on the visits of library and each nation visits almost the same amount and facing library is very good for each nation.

I do not have exact information about Chinese kids, but I think that nationality does not affect library visits and each nation visits almost the same amount, and going to the library is very good for everyone.

'Chinese gates' is a typo; it should be 'Chinese kids'. 'Visits of library' is incorrect; it should be 'library visits'. 'Each nation visits almost the same amount' is vague; 'amount' is uncountable and should be replaced with 'number' or rephrased. 'Facing library' is incorrect; 'going to the library' is appropriate. 'Each nation' is better replaced with 'everyone' for clarity.

Vocabulário

BoringTedious
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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