Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and incorrect articles like 'a library' instead of 'the library'.

Exemplo: I don't go to the library often, but I visit it when I have difficulty with literature because it helps me understand better. Also, I like to learn about history there, so I often read history books.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and better linking words like 'if' and 'otherwise'. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'for that I can grasp a knowledge'.

Exemplo: I am very interested in history, so I usually look for history books first. If I can't find any, I read literature books to improve my knowledge in that area.

Sugestão: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use simple past tense correctly and avoid confusing expressions like 'bosom friend' and 'having a phone with them'. Also, make your sentences more coherent and logical.

Exemplo: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I did not know much about it. I was usually busy playing with my close friends and using my phone. Also, I think not many people went to libraries at that time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect information. Avoid making assumptions or irrelevant comments. Instead, give a clear opinion or say you are not sure politely.

Exemplo: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I don't have enough information about their habits.

× Not often, but whenever I face difficulty in literature, I usually go to library so that I can curb my problem in a easy way.

✓ Not often, but whenever I face difficulty in literature, I usually go to the library so that I can curb my problem in an easy way.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library' which is necessary when referring to a specific place. Also, 'a easy way' is incorrect because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound, so the article should be 'an' instead of 'a'.

× Apart from this, to grasp a vast number of knowledge about history, I usually go a library.

✓ Apart from this, to grasp a vast amount of knowledge about history, I usually go to a library.

The phrase 'a vast number of knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'amount' instead of 'number'. Also, 'go a library' is missing the preposition 'to' before 'a library'.

× Well, I have keen interest in history, so I usually search a history book first in the library.

✓ Well, I have a keen interest in history, so I usually search for a history book first in the library.

The phrase 'have keen interest' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'keen interest'. Also, 'search a history book' is incorrect; the verb 'search' is usually followed by 'for' when looking for something, so it should be 'search for a history book'.

× Apart from this, if a history book is not available over there, I usually read a literature book for that I can grasp a knowledge about literature too.

✓ Apart from this, if a history book is not available there, I usually read a literature book so that I can grasp knowledge about literature too.

The phrase 'available over there' is better expressed as 'available there'. Also, 'for that I can grasp a knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'so that I can grasp knowledge' because 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× No, when I was a kid I not go to the library because I don't have a much knowledge about library at that time because I was usually busy with my bosom friend and having a phone with them.

✓ No, when I was a kid I did not go to the library because I didn't have much knowledge about the library at that time as I was usually busy with my bosom friend and using the phone with them.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'not go' and 'don't have' when referring to past events; it should be 'did not go' and 'didn't have'. Also, 'a much knowledge' is incorrect because 'much' with uncountable nouns does not take 'a'. 'Having a phone with them' is awkward; 'using the phone with them' is better. 'Bosom friend' is singular, so 'friend' is correct.

× Apart from this, I think that this that time is nobody is going in libraries.

✓ Apart from this, I think that at that time nobody was going to libraries.

The phrase 'this that time' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time'. Also, 'going in libraries' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'going to libraries'. The verb tense should be past 'was going' to match the time frame.

× Well, the Chinese kids are having a short memory, but I don't have a knowledge about them, so I don't think so.

✓ Well, Chinese kids have short memories, but I don't have knowledge about them, so I don't think so.

'The Chinese kids' is too specific; 'Chinese kids' is more general. 'Are having a short memory' is incorrect; 'have short memories' is the correct present simple form. 'A knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× It is pity to say that for me they go to library often or not.

✓ It is a pity to say that I don't know whether they go to the library often or not.

The phrase 'It is pity' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'pity'. Also, 'for me they go to library often or not' is awkward and unclear; it is better expressed as 'I don't know whether they go to the library often or not'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'.