Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: I often went to the university library when I was a student because it provided a quiet environment for studying. However, since I have graduated, I rarely visit the library as I no longer need to study.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats the idea of studying and the peaceful environment. Try to vary your vocabulary and provide more specific details about your activities. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually study because the calm atmosphere helps me concentrate. For instance, I focus on reading textbooks and writing notes, which improves my learning efficiency.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use past tense consistently and clarify your points. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'in my jurisdiction'.

Exemplo: I did not go to the library as a child because there were no libraries near my home. However, when I attended university, I often visited the library to study.

Sugestão: Your answer is vague and lacks clear reasoning. Avoid generalisations and provide specific reasons or examples. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide useful resources to support their learning.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was studying in a university because I have access to the university's library where I study peacefully because of the environment around me.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was studying at a university because I had access to the university's library where I studied peacefully because of the environment around me.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, 'have' should be changed to 'had' and 'study' to 'studied' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was studying in a university because I have access to the university's library where I study peacefully because of the environment around me.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was studying at a university because I had access to the university's library where I studied peacefully because of the environment around me.

The correct preposition to use with 'studying' in this context is 'at' rather than 'in' when referring to attending a university.

× But right now I have graduated and I don't feel the need to go to the library because I don't study right now.

✓ But right now I have graduated and I don't feel the need to go to the library because I am not studying right now.

The phrase 'I don't study right now' is awkward; the present continuous 'I am not studying' better expresses the current ongoing state.

× I used to study when I visit the library because it is a calm and peaceful environment around me.

✓ I used to study when I visited the library because it was a calm and peaceful environment around me.

Since 'used to' indicates past habit, the verbs 'visit' and 'is' should be in past tense 'visited' and 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× However, I usually don't go to library more often.

✓ However, I usually don't go to the library very often.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' here. Also, 'more often' is incorrect in this context; 'very often' is the appropriate adverbial phrase.

× I really don't go to the library when I was a child because where I belong we don't have access to the libraries nearby.

✓ I really didn't go to the library when I was a child because where I lived we didn't have access to libraries nearby.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Don't go' should be 'didn't go' and 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to reflect past time. Also, 'where I belong' is better expressed as 'where I lived' for past context.

× So when I was studying in university, I often go to the library because it is in my jurisdiction to go to the.

✓ So when I was studying at university, I often went to the library because it was within my jurisdiction to go there.

The phrase 'I often go' should be past tense 'I often went' to match 'when I was studying'. Also, 'in university' should be 'at university'. The phrase 'it is in my jurisdiction to go to the' is awkward; 'it was within my jurisdiction to go there' is clearer.

× So when I was studying in university, I often go to the library because it is in my jurisdiction to go to the.

✓ So when I was studying at university, I often went to the library because it was within my jurisdiction to go there.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to the.' It should be completed with a proper pronoun 'there' to refer to the library.

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

No correction needed; the preposition usage is correct here.

× I do think and believe the Chinese kids do go to the library because they are more developed and have knowledge about the things they have or the things where they belong to the country.

✓ I do think and believe that Chinese kids do go to the library because they are more developed and have knowledge about the things they have or the things related to their country.

Added 'that' for clarity. 'Where they belong to the country' is awkward; 'related to their country' is clearer. The sentence is in present tense and mostly correct otherwise.