Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating words like 'basis'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me improve my knowledge. Moreover, I enjoy reading various kinds of books there, which broadens my understanding.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition ('reading books and reading newspapers') and by using more natural expressions. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read books and newspapers because they help broaden my horizons and also relax my mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good. To improve, you can add a little more detail or explanation to enrich your response and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I wasn't interested in reading at that time.

Sugestão: Avoid saying you don't know; instead, try to give a general opinion or guess based on your experience. This shows your ability to communicate even when unsure. Also, avoid repeating 'I don't have any answer'.

Exemplo: I think many Chinese kids do go to the library, especially those who enjoy reading and studying, but it might depend on their personal interests.

× Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and even I do love reading books so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kind of books.

✓ Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and I also love reading books, so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kinds of books.

The phrase 'daily basis basis' contains a repeated word which is incorrect. Also, 'different kind of books' should be 'different kinds of books' because 'kinds' is plural when referring to multiple types. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by replacing 'and even I do love' with 'and I also love' for clarity and correctness.

× Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and even I do love reading books so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kind of books.

✓ Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and I also love reading books, so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kinds of books.

The phrase 'different kind of books' is incorrect because 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. The correct phrase is 'different kinds of books'.

× Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and even I do love reading books so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kind of books.

✓ Absolutely, I do love going to the library on a daily basis because it helps me to improve my knowledge and I also love reading books, so I get a chance to go to the library to read different kinds of books.

The use of 'and even I do love' is awkward and incorrect. It should be replaced with 'and I also love' to connect the ideas smoothly and correctly.

× I do a lot of things in the library like reading books and reading newspapers because it helps me to broaden the horizon of my mind and even relaxes my mind.

✓ I do a lot of things in the library like reading books and newspapers because it helps me to broaden the horizons of my mind and also relaxes my mind.

The phrase 'reading books and reading newspapers' is repetitive; 'reading books and newspapers' is more concise. Also, 'broaden the horizon of my mind' should be 'broaden the horizons of my mind' because 'horizons' is usually plural in this idiomatic expression.