Library— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you often go to the library?
Candidato
Definitely love that. I don't think it's popular in my country to actually sit down in the library and study in a silent setting like in the library. People often go to the coffee or spend time in their house just to study. I don't. I don't go to the library.
Examinador
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidato
I eat the library. I would say I read books because sometimes when you do research, you gotta go actually go to the library. Is more common for people to find the outdated material for your research in the library and sometimes I actually sit down and.
Examinador
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidato
I will say yes, 'cause when I was a kid, the Internet was another thing that's not very popular, and it's very helpful and convenient for people to go to the library to sit down in a quiet environment to review their notes or to study or to find books that's outdated.
Examinador
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidato
No, no, no.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lộn xộn và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết một cách mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because it's not a common study place in my country. Instead, people usually prefer studying at coffee shops or at home where they feel more comfortable.
What do you usually do in the library?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi và hoàn chỉnh câu. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
Exemplo: Usually, I read books or do research in the library because it has materials that are not available online. Sometimes, I also sit quietly to focus on my studies.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because the Internet was not popular then. It was a quiet and convenient place to study and find books that were not available elsewhere.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không giải thích. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ để câu trả lời có nội dung phong phú hơn.
Exemplo: No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because many prefer studying at home or using online resources, which are more convenient for them.
Gramática
× I eat the library.
✓ I go to the library.
The phrase 'eat the library' is incorrect because 'eat' is not the appropriate verb to describe visiting a place. The correct verb is 'go' when referring to visiting the library.
× Is more common for people to find the outdated material for your research in the library and sometimes I actually sit down and.
✓ It is more common for people to find outdated material for their research in the library, and sometimes I actually sit down and study there.
The original sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'It is' provides the subject, and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning. Also, 'your research' should be 'their research' to maintain generality.
× to find books that's outdated.
✓ to find books that are outdated.
The relative pronoun 'that' should be used instead of 'that's' (which is a contraction of 'that is') when referring to plural noun 'books'. Also, the verb should agree in number with the plural noun, so 'are' is correct.
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