Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your response more natural and concise by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week to research study materials. I find it helpful because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate better on my reading.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. To improve, try to use complete sentences with correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be specific about what you do in the library.

Exemplo: I usually study or revise mathematics and physics topics in the library because it has a quiet and peaceful environment, which helps me focus and study more effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct tenses. Also, avoid vague words like 'very bored' and explain your opinion with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I first went to the library when I was about 10 years old. At that time, I didn't enjoy it much because the atmosphere was quite dull, and I thought the library was only for studying, not for entertainment.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. To improve, use plural forms correctly and organize your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons why Chinese kids go to the library.

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library to prepare for exams. They consider it a quiet and efficient place to study, which helps them achieve better results and get into good universities.

× Yeah, I did go to the library like once a week for researching study sources and quite interest about some topics which requires some specific booklet or books in the library and it has a good mood during the library so I can focus on reading.

✓ Yeah, I used to go to the library about once a week to research study sources and was quite interested in some topics which required some specific booklets or books in the library, and it had a good atmosphere so I could focus on reading.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'did go' which is awkward here; 'used to go' better expresses habitual past action. 'Researching' should be 'to research' to match the infinitive form after 'for'. 'Quite interest' should be 'quite interested' to use the correct adjective form. 'Requires' should be 'required' to match past tense. 'Booklet' should be plural 'booklets' to agree with 'some'. 'Has a good mood' is incorrect; 'had a good atmosphere' is more natural. Verb tenses should be consistent in past tense to describe past habits.

× Umm, I I usually studying or revising topics around mathematics or physics that I study in school and it is uh, it it got a good atmosphere and tranquil space environment and library so I can be more effective for studying.

✓ Umm, I usually study or revise topics around mathematics or physics that I study in school, and it has a good atmosphere and a tranquil environment in the library so I can be more effective when studying.

The phrase 'I usually studying' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'study' after 'usually'. 'It it got' is incorrect; 'it has' is correct for present tense. 'Tranquil space environment and library' is awkward; better to say 'a tranquil environment in the library'. 'More effective for studying' is better as 'more effective when studying' for natural phrasing.

× Since I was 10 years old, I think it is my first time to been to library and for me it wasn't a very good experience because I think the atmosphere is very bored and considered to be a studying place and not a entertainment location.

✓ Since I was 10 years old, I think it was my first time to be in the library, and for me it wasn't a very good experience because I thought the atmosphere was very boring and it was considered a place for studying, not an entertainment location.

'It is my first time to been' is incorrect; correct form is 'it was my first time to be'. 'Been' is past participle and should not follow 'to'. 'Atmosphere is very bored' is wrong; 'atmosphere was very boring' uses correct adjective. 'Considered to be a studying place' should be 'considered a place for studying'. 'A entertainment' should be 'an entertainment' but better to say 'not an entertainment location'.

× Umm yeah, Chinese kid would usually go to the library just for preparing their exam and to and also to be considered library as a good place to study for Chinese kid because it is tranquil and more efficient to study about their academic journey to get in a better university.

✓ Umm yeah, Chinese kids usually go to the library just to prepare for their exams and also consider the library a good place to study because it is tranquil and more efficient for studying during their academic journey to get into a better university.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to agree with 'their exams'. 'Just for preparing' should be 'just to prepare'. 'To be considered library as a good place' is incorrect; better to say 'consider the library a good place'. 'More efficient to study about' should be 'more efficient for studying'. 'Get in a better university' should be 'get into a better university'.