Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: I often go to the library when I have upcoming exams because it provides useful resources for my studies. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but is a bit repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your points smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually study in the library because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Also, it makes me feel more motivated and reduces my stress, so it's a great place to focus on my work.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using simple sentences and correct grammar. Avoid informal phrases like 'abuse the computer' and explain your ideas more precisely.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes went to the library as a child, but I did not study seriously. I mainly used the computers there to play games, although this was sometimes not allowed.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better grammar and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly, and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they have many exams and face a lot of pressure when preparing for university. Therefore, they need a quiet place to concentrate without distractions.

× Sometimes when the when I have some incoming exam, I would often go to library for some resources research for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to improve my more concentrate on study.

✓ Sometimes when I have an upcoming exam, I often go to the library to research resources for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to concentrate more on my studies.

The phrase 'resources research' is incorrect; 'research' should be used as a verb with '-ing' form or as a noun properly. Also, 'improve my more concentrate on study' is incorrect; it should be 'concentrate more on my studies'. The verb 'concentrate' needs to be in base form after 'help me to'. Additionally, 'incoming exam' is better expressed as 'upcoming exam'. 'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Sometimes when the when I have some incoming exam, I would often go to library for some resources research for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to improve my more concentrate on study.

✓ Sometimes when I have an upcoming exam, I often go to the library to research resources for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to concentrate more on my studies.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, 'library' as a specific place requires 'the' to indicate a particular location. Also, 'some incoming exam' should be 'an upcoming exam' to use the correct article and adjective.

× Yeah, they do often go to library.

✓ Yeah, they often go to the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. When referring to a specific place like 'library', 'the' is necessary. Also, 'do often' is better expressed as 'often' for natural English.

× I would often go to library for some resources research for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to improve my more concentrate on study.

✓ I often go to the library to research resources for an auxiliary study program and it could also help me to concentrate more on my studies.

The preposition 'for' before 'some resources research' is incorrect. The verb 'research' should be used with 'to' or as a gerund. Also, 'improve my more concentrate on study' is incorrect; 'concentrate more on my studies' is the correct phrase. Prepositions must match the verbs and nouns they relate to.

× And I usually study in the library because it gives me more sense of belonging of study, and it could also help me be more concentrated since the environment is quiet and more freedom.

✓ I usually study in the library because it gives me a greater sense of belonging to my studies, and it also helps me to be more concentrated since the environment is quiet and offers more freedom.

The phrase 'more sense of belonging of study' is incorrect; it should be 'a greater sense of belonging to my studies'. Also, 'could also help me be more concentrated' should be 'also helps me to be more concentrated' to match present tense and correct verb usage. 'More freedom' needs a verb like 'offers' to complete the sentence.

× And I usually study in the library because it gives me more sense of belonging of study, and it could also help me be more concentrated since the environment is quiet and more freedom.

✓ I usually study in the library because it gives me a greater sense of belonging to my studies, and it also helps me to be more concentrated since the environment is quiet and offers more freedom.

The preposition 'of' after 'belonging' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when expressing belonging. Also, 'more freedom' needs a verb to connect it properly in the sentence.

× Umm yes sometimes but I don't think I study hard when I was young so I used to be able to library just for some gaming course and Hong Kong library you should have some computers so we can like abuse the computer to play some games which is sometimes not allowed in.

✓ Umm yes, sometimes, but I don't think I studied hard when I was young, so I used to go to the library just for some gaming courses. Hong Kong libraries have some computers, so we could use the computers to play some games, which is sometimes not allowed.

The verb 'study' should be in past tense 'studied' to match 'when I was young'. 'Used to be able to library' is incorrect; it should be 'used to go to the library'. 'Gaming course' should be plural 'gaming courses' if referring to multiple. 'You should have' is incorrect; 'have' is better. 'Abuse the computer' is informal and incorrect; 'use the computers' is appropriate. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× I used to be able to library just for some gaming course and Hong Kong library you should have some computers so we can like abuse the computer to play some games which is sometimes not allowed in.

✓ I used to go to the library just for some gaming courses, and Hong Kong libraries have some computers so we can use the computers to play some games, which is sometimes not allowed.

The phrase 'be able to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. 'Hong Kong library' should be plural 'libraries' if referring generally. 'You should have' is incorrect; 'have' is correct. 'Abuse the computer' is inappropriate; 'use the computers' is better. The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library'.

× So they need a very quiet place to concentrate on study to not get disturbed by others.

✓ So they need a very quiet place to concentrate on their studies and not get disturbed by others.

The phrase 'concentrate on study' is incorrect; it should be 'concentrate on their studies' to use the correct possessive pronoun and plural noun. Also, 'to not get disturbed' is better expressed as 'and not get disturbed' for smoother sentence flow.