Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь говорить более связно и избегать лишних слов. Также используйте связующие слова для логичности и стройности ответа.

Exemplo: I don't go to the library often because there are very few libraries in my country. However, I really enjoy reading books as a hobby. Unfortunately, my school doesn't have a library, but I hope to visit one in the future.

Sugestão: Ответ не ясен и содержит много ошибок. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов. Добавьте связующие слова для улучшения связности.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to use the Internet and sometimes to call my friends. For example, two months ago, I visited the library mainly to access the Internet.

Sugestão: Ответ не ясен и содержит ошибки в грамматике и лексике. Постарайтесь формулировать предложения проще и понятнее, отвечая прямо на вопрос.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries around me. Instead, I read books at home.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясностей. Старайтесь использовать простые и понятные предложения, отвечая прямо на вопрос. Избегайте сложных и неправильных выражений.

Exemplo: In my opinion, many Chinese children often go to the library because their families value education. Many homes also have personal libraries to encourage reading.

× I think not often because in my country there are very few libraries and I I really like reading books, it's just like hobby.

✓ I think not often because in my country there are very few libraries and I really like reading books, it's just like a hobby.

The phrase 'just like hobby' is missing the article 'a' before 'hobby'. 'Hobby' is a singular countable noun and requires an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× However, there are no libraries in my school, but in the future I would like to visit one of them.

✓ However, there are no libraries in my school, but in the future I would like to visit one.

The phrase 'one of them' is incorrect because 'them' refers to multiple libraries, but the sentence states there are no libraries in the school. It is better to say 'visit one' referring to one library elsewhere.

× I go to the library once in my life and it wasn't because I need to read books.

✓ I went to the library once in my life and it wasn't because I needed to read books.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past context 'once in my life'. Both verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× It was it was two months ago I went to the library and I came to them for for Internet.

✓ It was two months ago when I went to the library and I came there for the Internet.

The phrase 'came to them' is incorrect; 'them' is a pronoun for people or objects, but here 'there' (a place) is correct. Also, 'for for' is a repetition error. 'The Internet' requires the definite article.

× I should call for my friends.

✓ I should call my friends.

The verb 'call' does not require the preposition 'for' when referring to contacting someone. 'Call my friends' is correct.

× I don't have experience wanting to the library or visiting places with a lot of books in my childhood because of the world full books.

✓ I don't have experience going to the library or visiting places with a lot of books in my childhood because the world was full of books.

The phrase 'wanting to the library' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'going'. Also, 'because of the world full books' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because the world was full of books'.

× In my opinion, Chinese people, not only adults but kids, are growing wives wiser than other people in other countries.

✓ In my opinion, Chinese people, not only adults but kids, are growing wiser than other people in other countries.

The word 'wives' is incorrect here; it seems to be a typo or misuse. The correct adjective is 'wiser' without 'wives'.

× And in their opinion, they're not just going to lovely in their own home, they're all of them have their own libraries.

✓ And in their opinion, they're not just staying at home, they all have their own libraries.

The phrase 'going to lovely in their own home' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'staying at home'. Also, 'they're all of them have' is incorrect; 'they all have' is correct.