Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and provides reasons, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating ideas and focus on clear, concise sentences. Also, correct minor mistakes like 'welcomes' should be 'welcome' and 'con, convenient' seems to be a typo. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because there are very few public libraries open in Hanoi that welcome students. Instead, many people prefer studying in cafes since they offer a convenient and social environment where you can also enjoy a drink while working.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but repetitive and lacks fluency. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I just go there' and 'I just went there.' Also, try to provide more details or examples to enrich your response. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I rarely go to the library nowadays. The last time I visited was when I was in primary school, where I helped clean the room and organize books. Other than that, I don't usually spend time there.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Where is the library when I was a kid' is unclear. Try to use correct sentence structures and provide more specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid, but not very often. I mainly visited during primary school. However, I was more interested in playing games than reading books, so I mostly remember the library as a place full of books.

Sugestão: Your answer provides an opinion but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. For example, 'the kids not really is not really going to library' is confusing. Try to form clear, complete sentences and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: Nowadays, I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library. They usually spend time outdoors or playing on their phones. If they need a quiet place to study, their parents often send them to tutoring classes instead.

× I don't often go to the library because there are hardly any public libraries open in Hanoi that welcomes students.

✓ I don't often go to the library because there are hardly any public libraries open in Hanoi that welcome students.

The relative clause 'that welcomes students' refers to 'public libraries', which is plural, so the verb should be 'welcome' to agree in number.

× Nowadays, more people prefer studying or working in cafes because they offer a more con, convenient and social environment, and they also can grab a drink while studying or working.

✓ Nowadays, more people prefer studying or working in cafes because they offer a more convenient and social environment, and they can also grab a drink while studying or working.

The word 'con,' is a typo and should be removed. Also, the adverb 'also' should be placed after the modal verb 'can' for correct adverb placement.

× I just went there when I was a child in primary school.

✓ I only went there when I was a child in primary school.

The word 'just' is better replaced with 'only' to express the limited frequency in past tense context more clearly.

× I came there for helping cleaning the room and organizing the books.

✓ I came there to help clean the room and organize the books.

The phrase 'for helping cleaning' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to help clean' using the infinitive form after 'came there' to express purpose.

× Where is the library when I was a kid, but not very often.

✓ There was a library when I was a kid, but I did not go very often.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs to be restructured to express existence and frequency properly.

× So I just remember the library is just a place is full of books.

✓ So I just remember the library as a place that is full of books.

The sentence lacks proper relative clause structure and article usage. Adding 'as a place that' clarifies the meaning.

× Nowadays I see that the kids not really is not really going to library.

✓ Nowadays I see that kids are not really going to the library.

The sentence has double negation and incorrect verb form. 'Kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'the library' needs the definite article.

× They spend time outdoors and playing their phones mainly.

✓ They spend time outdoors and mainly play on their phones.

The phrase 'playing their phones' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'play on their phones'. Also, adverb placement is improved.

× If they need a place to study, the parents will send them to the actual classes or ask.

✓ If they need a place to study, the parents will send them to actual classes or ask for help.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or ask' which is incomplete. Adding 'for help' completes the thought.