Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy. For example, say why you like going to the library and what you do there.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. It is a quiet place where I can focus and learn new things. I usually borrow novels and magazines to read at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent. Use simple vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually read books to gain knowledge. For example, I like to read stories and learn about different topics. This helps me relax and imagine new ideas.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details. Use past tense correctly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a child because I loved reading books. Although I could not read many books at first, I enjoyed looking at pictures and listening to stories.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases and try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: I think many Chinese kids do not go to the library often because they prefer using technology. For example, they like playing games or watching videos on their phones instead of reading books.

× I always like to go to library for bring some books for me.

✓ I always like to go to the library to bring some books for myself.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'for bring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to bring'. Additionally, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly indicate the beneficiary of the action.

× It's a very quiet activity for me to get knowledge and get a piece of miles for you.

✓ It's a very quiet activity for me to gain knowledge and get a piece of mind for myself.

The phrase 'get a piece of miles for you' is incorrect. The intended phrase is likely 'get a piece of mind' and the pronoun should be consistent with the subject, so 'for myself' instead of 'for you'.

× Doing book reading in the library you get somebody Bobby.

✓ When you read books in the library, you can meet somebody, Bobby.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'When you read books in the library' clarifies the action, and 'you can meet somebody, Bobby' completes the thought logically.

× I already mentioned in the last question they were upgrading a sub code way to getting knowledge about other things to move over when we will, when we will learn some stories.

✓ I already mentioned in the last question that they were upgrading a sub code way to get knowledge about other things to move on when we learn some stories.

The sentence has unclear pronoun references and incorrect verb forms. 'Getting' should be 'get' after 'to'. 'Move over' should be 'move on'. The phrase 'when we will, when we will learn' is redundant; 'when we learn' is sufficient.

× It's a good idea to get a piece of mind before in a imagination world.

✓ It's a good idea to get a piece of mind before entering an imaginary world.

The phrase 'before in a imagination world' is incorrect. It should be 'before entering an imaginary world'. Also, 'imagination' should be the adjective 'imaginary'.

× I like to went to the library because I said it's my hobby, so book reading.

✓ I liked to go to the library because I said it's my hobby, so book reading.

The verb 'went' is past tense and should not follow 'to' which requires the base form 'go'. Also, 'I like' should be 'I liked' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So that's why I when I was child, I like to I, I don't know, I don't know how to read so many books, but sometimes I like to avoid the fixed case of some more to each other.

✓ So that's why when I was a child, I liked to read. I don't know how to read so many books, but sometimes I liked to avoid the fixed case of some more to each other.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I when I was child' should be 'when I was a child'. 'I like to I' is incorrect and should be 'I liked to read'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and may need rephrasing for clarity.

× Actually, according to me, maybe Chinese kids don't like to go to the library because they have a like a most of they have more technology for that's why they are more attacked with the technology and they'd like to play download games on the mobile phone.

✓ Actually, according to me, maybe Chinese kids don't like to go to the library because most of them have more technology, that's why they are more attracted to technology and they'd like to play downloaded games on the mobile phone.

The phrase 'have a like a most of they have more technology for' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'most of them have more technology'. 'Attacked with the technology' should be 'attracted to technology'. 'Play download games' should be 'play downloaded games'.

× But I have no time acknowledged regarding this site according to Mail, because I'll see some videos on the YouTube.

✓ But I have no time to acknowledge this site according to mail, because I watch some videos on YouTube.

'No time acknowledged regarding this site' is incorrect; it should be 'no time to acknowledge this site'. 'According to Mail' is unclear but kept as is. 'I'll see some videos' should be 'I watch some videos'. 'The YouTube' should be 'YouTube' without 'the'.