Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "As far as I remember" twice and improve sentence flow by linking ideas smoothly. Also, use articles correctly, e.g., "to the library."

Exemplo: No, I don't go to the library anymore. I used to go there to prepare for university, but now I prefer studying online because it's more convenient for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by using more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of "work on my things," specify what you mean. Also, avoid short disconnected sentences.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually work on my projects using my laptop. Additionally, I study for the IRIS exam and prepare for my university tests because the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

Sugestão: Your answer is brief and a bit unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add specific details. Also, clarify what "it was about painting and writing" means.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library regularly as a child. I often borrowed books about painting and writing, which helped me develop my creative skills.

Sugestão: Avoid saying you don't know. Instead, try to give a general opinion or guess based on what you know. This shows your ability to handle questions even if you are unsure.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them visit libraries regularly because education is very important in China.

× I used to go to library to prepare for university

✓ I used to go to the library to prepare for university

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually work on my project using my laptop

✓ I usually work on my projects using my laptop

The phrase 'work on my project' is acceptable if referring to a single project, but since the student likely works on multiple projects, the plural 'projects' fits better. Also, 'using my laptop' is correct as it indicates the tool used.

× I can work on my things better

✓ I can work on my things better

The phrase 'work on my things' is vague and informal. A better expression would be 'work on my tasks' or 'work on my assignments'. However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes listed in the grammar problem type list, and 'things' is not a grammar error per se, no correction is made here.