Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details about your hobby and the library.

Exemplo: Yes, I often visit the library near my home because I enjoy reading history books. It has a vast collection, which helps me spend my free time productively.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and structure your sentences better for clarity.

Exemplo: I usually read books at the library, and when I have research projects, I prefer searching for scholarly articles there because it's more reliable than using Google.

Sugestão: Good answer with relevant details. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and make your response more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing. Instead, I spent my free time attending music and dance classes, playing badminton, and doing artwork.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more confident in your answer. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same phrases. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

Exemplo: Although I don't know much about all Chinese kids, I've noticed that some at my school enjoy the library because they appreciate its calm and quiet atmosphere.

× I have a hobby of reading books of the history

✓ I have a hobby of reading books on history

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here. When referring to the subject matter of books, 'on' is the correct preposition to indicate the topic. Therefore, 'books on history' is the proper phrase.

× there is a library near my home where there are extreme number of books related to the history

✓ there is a library near my home where there is an extreme number of books related to history

The phrase 'extreme number' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'an extreme number'. Also, 'the history' should be 'history' without 'the' because it refers to the subject in general. Additionally, 'there are' should be 'there is' because 'number' is singular.

× enjoy my free time over there

✓ enjoy my free time there

The preposition 'over' is unnecessary here. The phrase 'enjoy my free time there' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× searching on the Google

✓ searching on Google

The definite article 'the' is not used before 'Google' when referring to the search engine. The correct phrase is 'searching on Google'.

× No, When I was a child I didn't go to the library because my focus was more towards playing

✓ No, when I was a child I didn't go to the library because my focus was more on playing

The phrase 'more towards playing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' after 'focus'. Also, 'When' should not be capitalized mid-sentence.

× I used to go to the music class or the dance class and also to the playground for playing badminton and sometimes for artwork

✓ I used to go to music class or dance class and also to the playground to play badminton and sometimes for artwork

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'music class' and 'dance class' when speaking generally. Also, 'for playing badminton' should be 'to play badminton' to express purpose correctly.

× I've seen some of the Chinese kids in my school library. They often like to go to the library because they always like the calm and peaceful environment, and they don't even like to talk to others much, so they prefer quiet places, and they usually go to the library

✓ I've seen some Chinese kids in my school library. They often like to go to the library because they like the calm and peaceful environment, and they don't like to talk to others much, so they prefer quiet places and usually go to the library

The phrase 'some of the Chinese kids' is better as 'some Chinese kids' for general reference. The word 'always' is unnecessary and slightly awkward here. Also, the repeated use of 'and' before 'usually go to the library' is redundant and can be omitted for smoother flow.