Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question first, then giving reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. Instead, I prefer reading ebooks since they are more convenient, especially because I have limited free time.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: When I visit the library, I usually borrow horror or thriller books because they keep me engaged. I prefer reading these genres as they help me relax and enjoy my time there.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, complete your sentences to avoid confusion.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because my school had a special library period. During that time, teachers introduced us to different books, and I was excited to learn from the encyclopedia there.

Sugestão: Your answer contains good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your points more clearly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries because their parents encourage them to learn about the world. Libraries help them explore different languages, history, and global events, which fascinates them.

× I often don't go to libraries because there's no there's no library near me or convenient to go for.

✓ I often don't go to libraries because there is no library near me or convenient to go to.

The phrase 'there's no there's no library' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, the preposition 'for' at the end is incorrect; it should be 'to' after 'convenient'. This corrects the sentence structure and preposition usage.

× I don't read much books.

✓ I don't read many books.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'books' is countable plural. Therefore, 'many' should be used instead of 'much' to correctly quantify countable plural nouns.

× I usually take horror books or thriller kind of things which makes me more engaged to read them

✓ I usually take horror books or thriller kinds of things which make me more engaged to read them

The phrase 'thriller kind of things' should be pluralized to 'kinds of things' to agree with the plural 'books'. Also, the verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'books or kinds of things'.

× if I go to library, I will make sure that it gives me a pleased mindset

✓ if I go to the library, I will make sure that it gives me a pleased mindset

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place. This corrects the article usage and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× it gives me a pleased mindset

✓ it gives me a pleasant mindset

The adjective 'pleased' describes a feeling of a person, but here the correct adjective to describe 'mindset' is 'pleasant'. This corrects the adjective usage.

× I used to go to a library when I was a kid because there was a special period library named library in my school days

✓ I used to go to a library when I was a kid because there was a special period library named 'Library' in my school days

The phrase 'named library' is unclear; adding quotation marks around 'Library' clarifies it is a proper noun. Also, the sentence is correct in past tense usage.

× where my teachers used to take us to the library to know the environment of the library and to get know about all the books and what would be there.

✓ where my teachers used to take us to the library to know the environment of the library and to get to know about all the books and what would be there.

The phrase 'to get know' is incorrect; it should be 'to get to know' to form the correct infinitive verb phrase. This corrects the sentence structure.

× I was thrilled to know about my encyclopedia there and what kind of information it.

✓ I was thrilled to learn about my encyclopedia there and what kind of information it contained.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb at the end. Adding 'contained' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× when people in China would teach their children to have a knowledge about all over the world

✓ when people in China teach their children to have knowledge about the world

The modal 'would' is incorrectly used here for habitual action; simple present tense 'teach' is appropriate. Also, 'a knowledge' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'All over the world' is simplified to 'the world' for clarity.

× and they would get fascinated to know about each and every language, what happens around the world and what happened around the world, the history they would learn and they would make sure the kids would learn that.

✓ and they get fascinated to know about each and every language, what happens around the world and what happened around the world; they learn history and make sure the kids learn that.

The sentence is overly long and uses inconsistent modal verbs. Changing 'would' to simple present tense 'get', 'learn', and 'make sure' improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, pronoun usage is clarified by removing redundant 'they would' and simplifying the structure.